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i would like to say that i enjoyed your story. especially since youre so ripe for improvement. and thats always a good thing.
i cant say exactly what i enjoyed because i might ruin your focus. but i will say that the more frantic bits were very compelling.
7121287 Thanks so much. :) Please tell me what you enjoyed I won't lose my focus
7121309 shhhh. this is a trade secret. tell a writer what you like and theyll forget the rest of the story. trust me when i say i have your best interests in mind.
7121321 Hey you know I have never thought of it like that. A lot of people have critiqued my story to try and help me and once I posted a help blog but none of that stuff ever worked in fact it made me give up on the stories.
7121339 it takes time and careful observation to learn the anatomy of an artist. just dont worry so much about what people like, instead: what you absolutely cant stand after reading your work; focus on that and youll be surprisingly happy after edting.
7121346 Thank you so much. Your words have encouraged me to write more. It's refreshing after a lot of harsh critics. Like seriously you should see my other stories they have craploads of dislikes. Only two of my twelve stories Wounded and this one have more likes than dislikes but the rest are really disliked. And that's why I have gotten discouraged but then you told me otherwise so thank you
7121352 they're not of our ilk. they need that harsh treatment because they were forged from it. but its everyones duty to encourage the discouraged. and you, an aspiring artist, know enough to start your second journey.
ill be here if you need any help/support/advice/pleasant company from now on. good luck star child.
7121364 Thank you so much for reading the story and listening to me and reassuring me. I'll have more stories on the way :)
I feel like this is the story of my life because I get terrified at night. When the lights are on I feel like im now safe from anything
9126652 Sorry about that. I feel where your coming from. I can't sleep unless I have a nightlight
Ah yes, another reason for Twilight to want to learn as many spells as possible, to stay away from the darkness.
11525938 true. Didn't think about that at the time lol