• Published 1st Sep 2016
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Care - TheEvilCookie



Twilight hugs Pinkie Pie

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You're getting cuddles

One day while Twilight and Pinkie where walking Twilight listened to Pinkie talk continuesly. She smiled as she thought Pinkie Pie was adorable. Pinkie continued to talk about random stuff but Twilight wasn't annoyed as she was happy her friend was having fun. She smiled as she got an idea but waited for the right moment to carry it out. As soon as they sat down at Pinkies place Pinkie continued to talk and then all of a sudden Twilight surprised Pinkie with hugs. Pinkie giggled and they both laid down and Pinkie squealed as Twilight kissed her all over.

"T-Twilight w-wait! Haha! Hahahahaha! Hey!" Pinkie laughed. Pinkie was absolutely happy as her best friend gave her hugs and kisses.

"You can't escape now!" Twilight exclaimed playfully. Pinkie giggled as Twilight kissed and cuddled her. Pinkie squealed as she laughed. Pinkie didn't see it coming since it came out of nowhere and was just done with no explanation. Twilight just did it to show her love for her pink maned friend.

Pinkie squealed and wiggled her back hooves as Twilight reined kisses on Pinkie. Pinkie just laid there as she giggled from the treatment her friend gave her. Pinkie hugged Twilight back and smiled as she wanted to stay like this forever but knew she couldent. She loved giving and receiving hugs so this just made her day 100% better.

"You're getting cuddles and your going to love it!!" Twilight declared playfully. Pinkie squealed and laughed as she hugged Twilight back. Hearing that made her giggle. Twilight continued to kiss Pinkie all over her face and Pinkie just laid there and accepted Twilights kisses. She had no idea that Twilight could be so affectionate. It put her off kind of as Twilight never did any of this stuff with her other friends. Sure they all hugged a lot but never did this.

No matter what it was though Pinkie absolutely enjoyed it. They both decided that they would do this from time to time repeatedly as they both loved it.

"Hey Twilight can we keep doing this from time to time?" Pinkie asked. Twilight grinned.

"Sure!" Twilight exclaimed. Pinkie giggled as Twilight went right back to kissing her and Pinkie just laughed and sighed in comfort as her friend lovingly cuddled her.

"You shall accept the cuddles!" Twilight declared. Pinkie squealed and laughed as she was kissed on her cheeks, and cuddled. Twilight didn't let up as she showered Pinkie with love constantly giving her cuddles. Pinkie was suprised at all this because nopony thought that she was like this but she loved it all.

Pinkie loved everything about the moment. It was a personal beautiful moment between the two of them as Twilight cuddled Pinkie. Twilight continued to kiss her friend's face. Twilight blew a raspberry on Pinkie's belly and Pinkie just squealed in laughter. Twilight smiled and kissed Pinkies belly and that made her giggle even more. Pinkie just squealed and laughed as she let Twilight be affectionate with her. Twilight seemed to outdo Pinkie in giving affection. Twilight then kissed all over Pinkies face and Pinkie shook her head and laughed from it.

"Alright Twilight! Alright! Hahahahahaha!" Pinkie laughed. Twilight smiled and nibbled and kissed Pinkies ears and Pinkie shook her head from side to side and giggled loudly.

"Here comes the cuddle monster! Roar!!" Twilight exclaimed playfully. Pinkie giggled from the silliness and the happiness from it all. Twilight resumed kissing and hugging her best friend. Twilight hugged Pinkie close as she kissed and teased Pinkie. Pinkie giggled and squealed. Twilight nuzzled Pinkies neck and kissed Pinkies forehead. Twilight hugged Pinkie as close to her.

Pinkie hoped Twilight would continue to stay while hugging and cuddling her for a while as it was so playful and peaceful for her. Twilight and Pinkie stayed silent after a while just cuddling and smiling at eachother. Both of their breathing was heard in the same room as they breathed in unison. Twilight listened to Pinkies heart beat and relaxed as she comforted Pinkie Pie while Pinkie Pie was still suprised but happy at all these kisses and cuddles.

"Thanks for this Twilight. I love this." Pinkie Pie said. Twilight smile.

"Your welcome that's why I did it." Twilight stated happily.

"Why did you surprise me like that though?" Pinkie asked giggling. Twilight grinned mischievously at her,

"I was just having some fun and I wanted to make you happy because I love you. Twilight exclaimed playfully. Pinkie giggled.

"I had a lots of fun as well. I love you to." Pinkie said. Twilight grinned and moved her head downwards. Pinkie realized what she was going to do and her eyes went wide as she begged and laughed.

"Twilight No!!" Pinkie begged. Twilight placed her lips on Pinkies belly and blew a raspberry making Pinkie scream in laughter. Twilight smiled and nuzzled Pinkie.

"Not the raspberries Hahahahaha!!" Pinkie begged. Twilight smiled at her lovingly as her precious friend giggled from the after affect of the raspberries. Twilight grinned and spoke.

"You want more raspberries? Okay!" Twilight exclaimed. Pinkie begged Twilight and Twilight blew another rasberry on her making Pinkie scream with laughter and then continued to cuddle her. Soon they were both silent as they looked at eachother. Twilight then spoke.

"I love you Pinkie." Twilight said to her friend.

"Thanks Twilight! I love you so much!" Pinkie exclaimed. Twilight smiled at her adorable friend. Twilight looked over at the clock and saw that they would have to get up soon since Pinkies shift at Sugarcube Corner was going to happen.

"Pinkie your shift is going to start." Twilight groaned not wanting to get up. Pinkie giggled.

"Don't worry we will be able to do this again silly!" Pinkie giggled. They both smiled at eachother. They stayed there for a few more minutes as they were melted into eachothers embrace.

"Good I can't wait to do that." Twilight said.

"Me niether. It's just you and me being silly and I like it like that." Pinkie said.

"Me to." Twilight said as well. Twilight smiled at Pinkie and Pinkie just smiled back both savoring this very special moment. It felt so special it was rare. Soon they both checked the clock and Twilight groaned and Pinkie just giggled and kissed Twilight on the cheek making Twilight smile. They both got up and Pinkie and Twilight went off to do their own things but they were going to meet later in the day and they both couldent wait to do it again another day.

Author's Note:

This is an apology for all those dark stories involving Twilight and Pinkie Pie I've been writing. I hope this story makes me look good again lol

Comments ( 55 )

yay I was starting to wonder if you hated Pinkie.

7530377 Dont worry I never did and I wanted to prove that by making this story you should read my other stories. I have some positive stories about Pinkie

Mm, very nice. I think you'll find a good majority of readers prefer to read sweet things like this. :twilightsmile:

I still think you could do with a bit of editing help (whistles inconspiciously) but this is much more enjoyable.Thanks for writing!

How many stories do you have lined up for publishing?! It's like my "chapter a day" frenzy I had, but with full-blown one-shots!

7530385 I work on this site constantly while I'm off of work. Just watch out I have a huge load coming after this first load. ;)

7530394 :pinkiegasp:

I shudder in anticipation. :moustache:

7530384 Your welcome. I wrote this story as a plea for an apology for those other stories I have written. I do notice that the majority here likes these types of stories. I might write another story involving tickling to so...:pinkiehappy:

7530382 Ill check em out sometime. And as a few people have said most people;e will probably like the lighter stuff better. I myself don't mind a dark story as long as its not to mean spirited.

7530422 Check out my story Surprise. It's an adorable story I wrote involving tickling and its with Pinkie and Twilight

7530428 Thanks a lot. Raspberries and hugs are the best :heart:

7530484 :heart: Check out my other lighthearted stories to :heart:

7530864 Thank you! I knew people would find it cute :pinkiehappy:

7532405 You don't like it?

7532879 You read a story of Pinkie and Twilight hugging what's not to like?

7534565 Thank you :rainbowkiss: Im glad you like it. I do don't I? :pinkiehappy:

7535102 less dislike more "what the... why?"

7535191 You don't understand it?

7535305 What I don't understand is why one would make this to be honest. I'm not one for such things, more into those long, and I mean really long, stories with massive amounts of plot, plottwists and words. A friend recommended this to me, that's the only reason why I read this.
As for the possible adorableness / cuteness, I don't really have a sense for that kind of stuff. It simply leaves me untouched.

7535409 Well I just wanted to make a cute sweet story. If you aren't for that cute stuff don't read it. It's not for everyone. A lot of people love those long adventure stories on fimfiction. People like stories like these because it comforts readers after a long tough day or they like it because they love really cute adorable stories or fluff as its called

It's pretty awesome!

7561568 Thanks I'm glad you liked it :twilightblush:

Your getting cuddles and your going to love it!!

Actually, it's you're

7564632 Thanks for pointing that out I didn't see that :twilightblush:

7564660
If you're up to challenge, and do like Twinkie Pie/TwiPie, I've got one for you. A vampire story containing said ship. For and extra challenge, it could be a horror story. Just an idea.

7564672 Eh...I don't know what I'll write. It's a cool idea...I don't know. I've got lots of other ideas I want to jot down to...sorry

7564770
It's alright, just pitching the idea

7564939 I'll keep it in mind though

This could definitely use a cleanup, I caught several minor errors here and there.

Still, this was an enjoyable piece of fluff. Nicely done.

7705611 I'm sorry about the errors. I'll fix them. I'm glad you enjoyed it :heart:

7706129 Sorry i didn't even know i made her like that. I'm glad you enjoyed it though :)

You have redeem yourself.

I guess

8125050 I wrote this story in 2016 so I haven't redeemed myself

8125343 It told me that you just made a new story! Ugh! I hate when things get delayed for a long time :rainbowlaugh:

8125507 Nah this story was from a while back. I wish there was a story that I made that was liked as much as this

8413764 I'm glad you thought it was cute! :twilightsmile:

Comment posted by TheEvilCookie deleted Jan 2nd, 2019

It should be fine without thems kisses. It really should. Don't mix romance with where it doesn't belong.

A few tickles, though :twilightsheepish:... Cuddling is fine, actually. Very cute.

There were errors, but I'm tired to report them right away :ajsleepy:. Also no build-up... Mayn't have cuddles and just be so short :applejackunsure:.

You must master your finishing skills: bring the story to an end gracefully to leave a good impression.

That's all :pinkiehappy:!

9654961 I thought all of it was okay including the kissing. The kissing isnt supposed to be construed like that in this story. Were the tickles okay?

9656750
In fact, had it not been for the tickles, I would have left... You see... One doesn't simply kiss the other. One kisses his mom, his grandma, maybe, even his teacher... Their male counterparts count as well, if the child is a girl, by the way. Manly friends might do that (but the kiss must be extremely manly itself as well, otherwise they mayn't!), and so might girly friends (but you know a kiss between two girly friends, when you see one). Of course possible spouses do that too, and their kisses aren't extremely manly or girly, nor are they the kisses one gives to his mother/father/grandmother/grandfather/someone elder (significantly!). There might as well be other types of kisses I may have missed.

Are Pinkie and Twilight a (grand)mother and a (grand)daughter? An innocent filly and an old lady? Are they two schoolgirls and besties?

Nope. And they aren't spouses (duh!).

They cuddle. That's strangely OK with me :applejackunsure:... So be it. But there's no room for kissing.

The tickles made me stay... A tickling belly kiss I'll allow :ajsmug:: that was just a tickling device. Had it not been :ajsleepy:... Had it been an affectionate kiss... That'd have made them schoolgirl besties. You didn't portray them like that (and nor does the show). The implication is clear.

Don't make them kiss :ajbemused:. The way you made them it's honestly cringe-worthy (my AJ emojis won't lie :ajsmug:). If it helps, though, cuddling was OK. I don't know, why I'm allowing that :twilightsheepish:. Tickles are welcome as well :twilightblush:...

Not the kissing :ajbemused:. (Am I enraged :twilightoops:? I shouldn't be!)

Comment posted by Andy Ray deleted Jun 6th, 2019
Comment posted by Andy Ray deleted Jun 6th, 2019
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