Shortly after reaching Northrend, Manet's Lifetime friend, and sister in all but blood, Moriza, is abducted by the scourge. Setting out on a quest to find her, Manet's search soon turns into a mission of vengeance. Joining a group of adventurers, the best both the Alliance and the Knights of the Ebon Blade have to offer, she assaults the Icecrown Citadel, with her final goal being the frozen throne. But because of an inattentive raid member, Manet finds herself thrown from the top of the citadel and into a strange new world...
This story is a crossover between World of Warcraft: Wrath of the Lich King, and MLP season 2. The cover image is a screenshot of my shaman taken from the WoWHead website. I'm a bit rusty on the lore, as it's been a few years since Wrath was relevant content, so if i messed anything up, feel free to point it out to me.
Intro Arc - Prologue thru ?
This looks like it might have some potential.
Hmmmmmm interesting
7507853 I don't understand? Is that meant to be some kind of joke? Are you telling me I should stop writing? If you find something wrong with me or my writing, a detailed written response is much more helpful than a vague video response.
7508145 ITS JUST A PRANK BRO
Ahh yes, the good old pants down joke. (I'm not sure what i sid was correct but it is funny to me.)
And i think he would wish he was dead again right now.
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ScootalooFTW could always have him get blamed for prematurely pulling the boss with Hunter's Mark - an ability that doesn't even generate combat, much less aggro.
Which may or may not have happened to me at least once...
7512337 My favorite are the hunters that forget to dismiss their pets when they jump down to skip trash mobs in certain dungeons, end up pulling ALL the thing
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The bow thing is an actual thing that happened to us. My raid group in wrath was working on our first deaghwhisper heroic kill, our hunter forgot to check his gear before the raid, ended up breaking his bow and screwing us. we wiped at like 5% on what would have been our first heroic kill
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I understood but hated people who assumed that I didn't know what I was doing. I got kicked out of a few groups because I would use Eyes of the Beast to jump my pet down, make it stay, and then jump down after it. Y'know, just to be ornery.
Some people have no appreciation.
7512438 I never assumed, but there was a reason I called them Huntards.... there were some pretty terrible players I've run into, and they usually played a hunter.....
Lol I played hunter and I never pulled mobs, but I could generate enough threat to pull a boss off the tank.
Keep up the good work, my man!
Why do i have the urge to say "God damn it leroy".....
2 things:
1. I have decided not to play hunter for a while due to me getting bored of leveling one around lvl 75... and dragonblight burning my urge to play that character and the fact that i can screw stuff up if my bear taunts something or i end up pulling too much agro...
2. A tip for writing is knowing your audience. say if you were writing about idk... Harry potter on a Harry potter fanfiction site. do you need to go over the events of the first two books to a fanbase of people who read through the series and just wanted more... (note now that this may not be the best example). Not really... but... if it was a general fanfiction website then yes you would.
7517716 As I had said in the author's note, the main reason for that extra bit of exposition in the beginning was because I'm trying to practice different aspects of my writing, and to explain my head cannon for certain events in the show, as my story will be building off of them. I appreciate the feedback though, and will definitely keep that in mind.
Amazing how she shrugs off her form changing with nary a sniff of consternation.
7550748 At the beginning, she was more worried about helping whoever she heard screaming, after that, while I admit it kind of skipped my mind, weird shit happens in Azeroth all the time, so it isn't really all that difficult to imagine her just kind of rolling with it. Plus she can turn into a Ghost Wolf at will, so the quadruped thing isn't really anything new to her.
It's Arthas, not Arthus.
7550838 Appreciate it! I'll fix that right now
7550748 Yes, it is strange to see that around here. But i guess she is used to something like that, i think?
ok hold up when did she turn into I pony cause I did not see that come up until now and she was still in her draenei form and you had her explain what the draenei where and twilight described what she looked like as a normal draenei so why is she now a pony out of no where
7582463 when she woke up in the crater she was a pony. She fought on her hind legs using her tail as a counterbalance. Reread the part where she was waking up in the crater, she talks about feeling changed and having hooves instead of hands.
7582463 Eh, he kinda glossed over that, as well as any shock normally associated with such catastrophic changes. Because shaman. *sighs*
It is lazy writing, if I might point out. You can't just skip the mental aspects and what such changes do to a character. It makes her feel unrelatable and dull. I feel nothing for this character because she is starting to feel like a Gary Stu.
7582463 After going back and reading what I had, I realized I didn't exactly make it clear how she changed. She has an equine-like form, although she kept the defining features of the Draenei (the glowing eyes, the kinda serpentine tail, the neck-tentacle things, and the goats horns) her hooves are no longer cloven, and she has a light coat of fur instead of skin.
Very good improvement with your characters! Looking forward to the next chapter!
7756264 Im glad you enjoyed it! If you see anything else I can improve on, please, point it out!
7508172 yo, quit stealing chromosomes
Before I read it, what is the Dark and Gore tag for ?
7812731 they haven't come into play yet, but there will be fighting and some dark themes, but nothing (that I think is) too excessive
Great chapter, I like the ribbing between squeaky and manet.
I'm seeing more improvement in your writing. Keeping up!
7856054 It's because of feedback from great people like yourself! <3
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"H-hello?"
8093256 see my blarg post here for info on wats going on with my stories.
*look left.... look right...
*blow dust away
*cought
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"Update News?... Pls?"
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With things like these, people kinda tend to get numb to theses situations.
And do they really travel the GALAXY!!???????
Objection! Ponies arms don't bend the wrong way. They just have different proportions, and the "inverted Elbow" is actually their wrist.
I'm curious, why make her a pony? I mean, Draenei are blue space goats already, just making her quadruped would be que enough for the with vibe with minimum changes. I know this chapter had been long published and continued, but those bothered me enough to ask.
Oh, and Blizzard retconned those 25k. It's 15 now.
A little too telly, but interesting nonetheless. Do you intend to continue writing it?
Since Daimond dogs are a thing, What's the pony version of the dog house...? because now shiny is in it.
*squie
What's a Draenei, again?
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so you doing regular updates now? or are you still taking a break?
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won't be as regular as they were, but I'm going to be putting some time into this story again. Got a bit of a burst of inspiration for the part that I had wanted to rewrite, and managed to finish this while procrastinating my other stories, lol.
Your writing he improved! The flow is much better! I would recommend getting an editor. There are a few errors scattered about.
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I had just picked up an editor, right before I took a 10 month hiatus from this story. Didn't really feel comfortable PMing him out of the blue asking for an edit -_-
Oh hey, this one is back, nice! I missed it
I wonder if Manet remembers to use Gift of the Naaru. I know I rarely do
Hey, where did you get those eight years and 80%? Some source or yourself?
Hope to see more of this soon. Specially how Manet will react to angry flappy horny pink pony
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I read up a bit on their lore for those numbers. As for GotN, it's going to work slightly different in the fic than it does in games. IE, it's going to be a very strong heal that can heal what would be a fatal wound, but it severely weakens the caster for a period of time afterward. That's the current plan, anyway.
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She's not exactly fully pony. Shes got a similar body shape, yes, but she's still 100% Draenei.