The Derby, A popular equine based sports event where many bet on the odds of a particular pony coming in first.
When you leave it all on the track, only the strong survive. But when winning means trampling over your own kind, does the guilt of winning override the fear of loosing and the punishments that follow?
Things are different in the human world, here we are used as entertainment be it for races or breeding others are used to work or worse become food for our captors.
My name is now Dash, A rising queen of the track who's looking for a way for us all to go back.
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Dark and a good story concept, but the "Humans are Bastards" message is very unsubtle.
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-shrugs- meh I know but hey I just have history to work with and humans on a fundamental level are bastards.
And its going to get much worse from here.
I adore this concept and I'm eager to see more, but I keep reading in a rhyming rhythm thanks to the opening, haha.
Please do more, good Brony, for we wish to see more.
I only do request that you throw it into a spell check as there are some scattered typos here and there. Also, "loose" should be "lose" instead.