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Hush now, quiet now, Its time to lay your sleepyhead..It's time to go to bed..

A broken home with muffled screams.
Fallen stars and shattered dreams.

EDIT:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mT2pxC2mCAI&feature=youtu.be
the Lullaby from chap 2 for your listening pleasure.

If any other ponies make killer music/art or readings from this please post or message me so I may enjoy them as well ;D

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Comments ( 34 )

This is a darker story so please read it all the way before judging there is a message and yes the end is broken up and appears to be missing elements, this is intentional and will be covered in the notes.

Very interesting, I suppose :rainbowdetermined2:

I'm not sure what to say. It was creepy I'll give you that. It certainly is fuel for nightmares... if those bothered me anymore. I wish this was up while I was still writing my cupcakes fic, this could've put me in such an evil mood so quickly.

Nice job.

oooh, creepy. I LOVES IT! :rainbowkiss:

:twilightangry2: Luna's mane. I get through the story and I'm like, wow this is pretty cool and it's creepy. Then I read this and I'm like, great, there's a message and it's all deep and artistic and stuff. :twilightangry2: Now I hafta pretend I learned something from it all.

I'll give you props though, I wasn't thinking about it at the time, but the loss of detail through the story is there and that's actually pretty nice how you did that. Good work.

Very well done. Though I may be immune to ponyscary stuff now, I still read them for the thrill. But I still read them in broad daylight.

This story was very poetic, I enjoyed reading this very much. :pinkiehappy:

Wait just a second... the ending makes it sound like Pinkie died and was reborn is that what your saying? If so it is an interesting concept I applaud the originality!

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:pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp: No way somepony read it!!!!!!I feel quite honored!!! and thanks for saying my user name is cool

I loved it! This is something new, something not everyone are able to create! Well done!:pinkiehappy:

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eyup her life is perpetual as covered in chap 3 in the notes, the theory is in there and reasoning behind it.

Very.... poetic. Poetic... but good.

731759 Thankyou, I try to have all my fics contain some poetic elements.

I am glad you enjoyed it.

please if you find the story worthy of your read, please be kind enough to upvote. Thankyou

BR

Time to write my story with lots of:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

Depression story time!! YAY!!
Man, I think I really gonna draw some stuff for this :3 and when I'm done you'll never see me again...coz I gonna need some happy stuff^^

EDIT²
You guys should listen to the score of Nightmare on Elm Street (2011) while reading this. It doubled the eerinesssssssssssss

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I feel honored, I look forward to the art goodness and oh yes Nightmare on elm street sets this off quite nicely.

Realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy realy nice work! :pinkiecrazy:

For some reason, this reminds me of Hypno's Lullaby. Don't look it up on you tube. Ever... Please?:fluttershysad:
btw I love this. It's so creepy.

738684 i sing that song to the kids i babysit when they go to bed:pinkiehappy:

I understand a bit more now. They better have Pinkie's sisters in season three!

760124 yes, they must. They also have to have Scoot's parents and Dashie's parents



Wow, I wasn't really expecting a continuation on this. This was great though. But i have one question, is she free of the cupcakes persona now, or was the 'she will leave as Pinkamena' her leaving with it? Cuz i can see her being Pinkie leaving room for Pinkamena to be a diff side of her, but at the same time I'm conditioned to see Pinkamena as her dark side.

Very creative and creepy. I love it! :pinkiecrazy:

Very creative and creepy. I love it! :pinkiecrazy:

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NOOOOOOOOOOOO

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