• Published 8th Aug 2016
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The Ponies Before the Cart - Erised the ink-moth



Though the Applewood derby got off to a shaky start for the CMC, it all turned out alright in the end, and a valuable lesson was learned. But for their sisters, there are still a few lingering feelings to get out.

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Honesty

Author's Note:

The one-shot has been doubled!

Three fillies stood proudly before their prize-winning creations, each wearing big happy grins. Standing just behind them were the three older mares the trio looked up to most in their lives. The moment of triumph and pride was forever captured and displayed on the wall of their clubhouse, right next to a crayon map of Ponyville and a partially covered Wonderbolts poster.

"Well Crusaders," Applebloom said, stepping off the ladder and spitting out the extra nails, "I think we can say the Applewood Derby was a complete success."

"Absolutely!" Scootaloo agreed confidently.

"Mmm hmm." Sweetie nodded.

Their smiles didn't last a full second before melting into deadpan frowns.

"So should I say it, or do one of you wanna?" Applebloom asked. Seeing no response from her friends, she let out a sigh. "I think we've been putting a little too much faith in our older sisters lately."

Scoot and Sweetie murmured something vaguely in agreement, poorly hiding how awkward it felt to admit it.

"It sure feels like we've all been here before, doesn't it?" Scootaloo said, chafing one foreleg against the other. "I mean Dash and the others have really come through for us before... Like when I was going to quit the opening ceremony for the Equestria Games, all because I couldn't fly."

"I know. We were there when Rainbow Dash gave you that amazing pep talk." Sweetie chimed in. "It reminded me of when Rarity actually got covered in mud to compete in the Sisterhooves Social with me. But you're right... it does seem like they have a tendency to..."

"Ignore what we want and focus on doing things their way?" Scootaloo offered, to which Sweetie Belle had to agree. "So then what do we do? We've always relied on our sisters for advice. Their the grown-up ponies for Celestia's sake! We're supposed to listen to them, or something."

Sweetie tapped her chin in thought. "I guess we could just do things without them from now on. But that doesn't sound like fun. I want to do things with Rarity. I just don't want to feel like my ideas don't matter."

"Exactly!" Applebloom exclaimed. "That's what we need to do. We just need to find some way to show our sisters that our ideas matter. We might still be fillies, but we're not dumb, we just think differently than what ponies are used to. Remember back when Zecora first started comin' into town, and everypony was scared outta their socks?"

"Yeah! You were the only one brave enough to go up to her and ask what she wanted, and look how well it turned out!" Scootaloo said.

"Right?" Applebloom said, though her grin quickly slumped back to a frown. "Although ah had the same problem with everypony treatin' me like a little filly back then too. I guess not that much has changed."

"So how do we fix that?" Sweetie asked, and the three huddled under their thinking lamp.

Suddenly, Applebloom popped her hoof up and turned it on. "I got it! During our lessons with Twilight, I saw a recipie for an age potion. It'll be tricky, but I think-"

"No." Both her friends cut her off before she could even get into the details.

"No offence Applebloom, but we haven't had much luck with potions." Sweetie reminded her, giving them all shivers at the thought of the Hearts and Hooves Day incident.

"Plus, I don't think turning ourselves into mares would actually make our sisters take us more seriously." Scootaloo reasoned, "If anything they'll think we were even more childish for trying it."

"Good point." Applebloom conceded, and the three of them slumped together into a puzzled pony pile.

"Maybe we should start being honest with them." Sweetie Belle suggested after a while, drawing confused sounds from her friends. "What I mean is, the whole problem today could have been avoided if we had just told our sisters what we wanted, and not beat around the bush with suggestions, but actually tell them. Those were our carts after all."

"Do ya think they would have listened if we had?" Applebloom asked. "Applejack can be surprisingly stubborn when she thinks shes right... which is all the time."

"Maybe. But we've seen what happens when we don't even try. Remember that time with the school newspaper?"

Her friends nodded, thinking back on how Diamond Tiara blackmailed them with embarrassing photos so they'd continue their gossip column. They were so worried what everyone would think if they saw those silly pictures, that they didn't realize what would happen if they kept exposing other ponies secrets.

Sure everypony forgave them when they publicly admitted their mistake, but it all could have been avoided with a simple 'Diamond Tiara's forcing us to do it! We don't want to make ponies hate us. Please help!' They were surprised Cheerilee let Diamond off so easily.

"And that time with Babs?"

Again Scoot and Applebloom nodded, knowing if they'd just told Applejack that Babs was bullying them, they would have found out why. But they were too intimidated, and didn't want to be 'snitches'. So instead they took matters into their own hooves, and nearly destroyed their friendship with Applebloom's cousin. It was only by luck that they were able to stop her from taking that spill into the mud during the parade. They'd saved Babs, but once again they became the town's laughing stock, and all due to their own reluctance to tell the truth.

"So why not just be honest from now on. If we need help with something, or if we have our concerns, why not just say so?" Sweetie asked.

"But... what if it's something really bad?" Scootaloo asked with a worried frown.

"Or what if we do, and our sisters don't take us seriously again?" Applebloom joined in.

Sweetie fixed them both with a determined stare. "Come on girls. I know Rarity, Applejack and Rainbow Dash haven't always done what we wanted, but they're still our older sisters, and they love us. It doesn't matter how bad or awkward something is; they'll be there for us no matter what. Maybe they'll misinterpret what we say, or even jump to conclusions, but if we don't even ask, there's no way they'll know we need them.

"Can we at least give them that chance from now on?" Sweetie asked, offering a hoof to each of her friends.

"Definitely." Scootaloo said, grabbing Sweetie's right hoof in hers. "And if they misinter- missing-... if they don't understand what we mean, we'll be sure to clear things up."

Applebloom joined the circle. "And even though we'll always have faith in them, we have to remember that they can make mistakes too, because they're just ponies... they're our big sisters."

Comments ( 8 )

:applecry: “We were extremely fortunate to get off with only a few good scratches.”

:scootangel: “The other racers were lucky they didn’t get any scratches.”

:unsuresweetie: “And did anypony notice? We went straight for our sisters without missing a beat. Didn’t think about any other way. Seems to be a habit with us.”

7497569 Well, let me say this much for a counter arguement.

AB: Your parents aren't around anymore, and who knows if Granny Smith or Big Macintosh were around? Plus, Applejack's always been a bit of a control freak, who's to say she wouldn't have found out and tried to take over anyway?

SC: Don't know about your parents (assuming you have them), but Rainbow Dash has come through for you before. You had no way to know she was going to take over the project.

SB: You seem to be at your sister's boutique far more than your own home, and your parents don't exactly strike me as the most artisticly gifted.

7504352 You might be thinking of "Priorities."

7497569

“And did anypony notice? We went straight for our sisters without missing a beat. Didn’t think about any other way. Seems to be a habit with us.”

I thought of that myself. If they'd stepped back and considered it rationally...

:applecry: "Y'know, Applejack's great, but she ain't that much about speed. Not like Rainbow Dash. Reckon she'd be willin' ta help me."

:scootangel: "Rainbow Dash can get pretty creative with her tricks... but I'm not sure that translates to design. That's more Rarity's thing."

:unsuresweetie: "Rarity's always trying to stay on top of the trends. Traditional would be kind of the opposite. I'll go see Applejack instead."

And then the conflict would probably come out in a different way.

7858465 You honestly think Scootaloo would have been happy with Rarity's design?

7862862 Therein might be a problem. Even if she doesn't like the design herself, would she be able to step back and say, "This is the sort of design that the judges are likely to score high in Creative, so I'll live with it"?

7863306
Well, this might help.

"Plus, I don't think turning ourselves into mares would actually make our sisters take us more seriously." Scootaloo reasoned, "If anything they'll think we were even more childish for trying it."

"Growing Up Is Hard to Do" is likely to address this matter.

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