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Damocles
i guess you want to read my bio ehh okay here we go. I'm a texan,I like guns,and i want to become a engineer and smith. Okay you read it now stop reading and go along with your regular things,
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Bit over discriptive and I never have played Act of Aggression but I'm interested
7464861 ehh what part was over descriptive can you please tell me and should I fix it?
Please sir, may I have some more?
7464930 Do not fret I Am writing as fast as I can but I'm running out of vanilla coke and it's kinda hard to put down ideas, as my ideas are flying everywhere right now considering I was taking a nap when this thing got approved ,and when I wake up from a short nap I get a headache
Keep it up. This is one of a kind!
7464974 Yay but don't worry I'm writing the third chapter? the fourth chapter gah I cant think clearly with this headache
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Just be cautious with the headache.
7464980 A little bit of column a, a little bit of column b to be honest
7464984 yhea this is what I get for waking up after a short nap to check if my story got approved
Initial objective rating: N/A out of 10
Initial personal rating: on a scale of "white bread" to "marinated garlic shrimp scampi", i rate this story "freshly cooked taco meat"
the quality of the writing is too unevolved to give useful advice or functional rating scores; the writer needs encouragement to write more; the experience from writing more will improve the quality to an advisable level.
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Acknowledged
7465020 Eheh *twiddles thumbs* you see this is the first time I'm writing outside of high school so I'm pretty inexperienced when it comes to this type of stuff also taco meat is delicious now I have to get back to typing my union break is over.
I never actually played or heard about Act of Aggression, but I'm guessing that it's a strategy war game so I am now interested.
7465073 it is a spiritual successor to the old act of war games also it is a RTS where you build your base rally your troops and try not to die to the ai on easy mode
I am intrigued good sir
7465114 next chapter is nearly out
7465123 looking forward to also the tablet thing made me laugh a little bit'gets sent to equestrian buying stuff for a game after getting off of said game what do you do play more games!!' Basically what I thought
7465167 there is more to that tablet then that my friend notice how it said scan blueprints I may be a US army general but oh no I am not going to be bound to this game, only I shall branch out as I find tech in the world and the multiverse although the dead pony had the first puzzle piece to making my infantry stronger than they are right now.
7465099 Cool, I'll be sure to read and see how this'll be playing out.
One day ... one day I shall create a longer chapter and maybe do a collab with someone
Am I the only one think.of all the negation techniques. Also first well second but the author doesn't count for his own story
Can you do more please
Some errors and maybe some structuring of the blocks of text could be changed.
7465596 what do you mean by negation techniques?
7466124 I just woke up and going on break for a hour or two to play the game so I can get construction right
7466563 yhea I could use a little more experience when it come to writing as this is my first story I'm writing out of high school, and yes I did spot the errors but I was too sleepy to do anything at the time
I love the act of aggression games. hope you continue.
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Okay im back from my break and ready to write.
7466576 sorry autocorrect fired at me I meant interrogation
7467185 still what interrogation techniques, that's not until next chapter *insert evil laughter here.* Remember were not on earth ,and they are not human so the Geneva convention does not apply here.
Huh would you look at that I'm in the game crossover group . Thank you whoever put my story overthere now I must get back to writing
Also before people start complaining about the whole base thing, Amber is a AI she can manage things better than me by miles so it is very possible she could build all that while I was gone.
So it seems that Eric is now standing on planet Equis where humans aren't sapient and are treated as slaves or pets. It really did surprise me that now things will be taking a different turn on Equis when Eric does free the other humans for freedom. I wonder what else has been going on? Also though, yeah I kinda want to see this story on rated teen since some other stories are on teen as well. Except they don't show scenes like clops, sex, or something like that since those ones are considered on rated mature only.
7468340 I was asking If I should change it to mature so next episode I have more lenient writing when it comes to war because you know explosives,phosphorus,bullets,nukes,cannon shells and whatever I or amber could think of next Can get a bit graphic
Also a internet cookie to whoever geuess the two relatives to humanity
7468349 Oh... uh well I guess it'll be changed to mature from probably a lot of gore. Just one question though, are some of the chapters going to be mature or maybe more than that?
7468380 mmm one but that one will be a long ways from today maybe towards the end of the fic which I don't plan on stopping at least for a couple of years I think at least
7468380 also i never really said who said the human weren't sapient for all we know it could be solar empire propaganda to keep the eyes of the world off their back
7468407 Okay and keep on going with new chapters. I like to see what Twilight and her friends are up to, probably good or bad in my opinion on just guessing it.
7468441 don't wory the ponies that everyone knows and love will make an aperance soon... As soon as maybe a chapter or two away.
The sun princess is so dead they won't live to see the day good chapter can't wait for more
is it bad that doing the hole thing I was thinking "When Is Jim Raynor Ridders going to get here? so he can be like (The bit at 1:25)
7469151 huh well I was not expecting that but yheah I can see the similarities. Also Jim Raynor can come whenever he like I'm just waiting for someone to make him a displaced
No seriously Jim Raynor can do a displaced any time with me just ask.it would be perfect considering we both fight for freedom.
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Why does almost evey HiE have an evil version of Celestia?
I'm still gonna read your fic but with a trope as old and stupid as Tyrant Celestia your not getting a like from me.
7469435 I'm sorry this disappoints you but I need a storyline to follow and evil celestia is the easiest to do otherwise I would be sitting in front of my desk trying to think up new ideas and won't have time writing this story
7469545 Its not a problem champ, keep doing what your doing.
I'm going to give everybody a clue to the next chapter. It is called miniature suns, if any body remembers their chemistry class it will make sense.
Well...
Los pegasus certainly has become a shining jewel...
Though not what one would hope...
Even scum are better than slavers
7470969 It shined like the sun more specifically it shine like 180 suns with the total explosive power of 85,500 kilotons of TNT give or take a few pounds