One day ... one day I shall create a longer chapter and maybe do a collab with someone

Am I the only one think.of all the negation techniques. Also first well second but the author doesn't count for his own story

Can you do more please

7465596 what do you mean by negation techniques?

7466124 I just woke up and going on break for a hour or two to play the game so I can get construction right

7466563 yhea I could use a little more experience when it come to writing as this is my first story I'm writing out of high school, and yes I did spot the errors but I was too sleepy to do anything at the time

I love the act of aggression games. hope you continue.

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Okay im back from my break and ready to write.

7466576 sorry autocorrect fired at me I meant interrogation

7467185 still what interrogation techniques, that's not until next chapter *insert evil laughter here.* Remember were not on earth ,and they are not human so the Geneva convention does not apply here.

Huh would you look at that I'm in the game crossover group . Thank you whoever put my story overthere now I must get back to writing

Don't know if this is a crossover but I can't help but compare it to the " Motheship ship crew mod/ Terran starship command mod" from fallout 3.