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Also before people start complaining about the whole base thing, Amber is a AI she can manage things better than me by miles so it is very possible she could build all that while I was gone.
So it seems that Eric is now standing on planet Equis where humans aren't sapient and are treated as slaves or pets. It really did surprise me that now things will be taking a different turn on Equis when Eric does free the other humans for freedom. I wonder what else has been going on? Also though, yeah I kinda want to see this story on rated teen since some other stories are on teen as well. Except they don't show scenes like clops, sex, or something like that since those ones are considered on rated mature only.
7468340 I was asking If I should change it to mature so next episode I have more lenient writing when it comes to war because you know explosives,phosphorus,bullets,nukes,cannon shells and whatever I or amber could think of next Can get a bit graphic
Also a internet cookie to whoever geuess the two relatives to humanity
7468349 Oh... uh well I guess it'll be changed to mature from probably a lot of gore. Just one question though, are some of the chapters going to be mature or maybe more than that?
7468380 mmm one but that one will be a long ways from today maybe towards the end of the fic which I don't plan on stopping at least for a couple of years I think at least
7468380 also i never really said who said the human weren't sapient for all we know it could be solar empire propaganda to keep the eyes of the world off their back
7468407 Okay and keep on going with new chapters. I like to see what Twilight and her friends are up to, probably good or bad in my opinion on just guessing it.
7468441 don't wory the ponies that everyone knows and love will make an aperance soon... As soon as maybe a chapter or two away.
The sun princess is so dead they won't live to see the day good chapter can't wait for more
is it bad that doing the hole thing I was thinking "When Is Jim Raynor Ridders going to get here? so he can be like (The bit at 1:25)
7469151 huh well I was not expecting that but yheah I can see the similarities. Also Jim Raynor can come whenever he like I'm just waiting for someone to make him a displaced
No seriously Jim Raynor can do a displaced any time with me just ask.it would be perfect considering we both fight for freedom.
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Why does almost evey HiE have an evil version of Celestia?
I'm still gonna read your fic but with a trope as old and stupid as Tyrant Celestia your not getting a like from me.
7469435 I'm sorry this disappoints you but I need a storyline to follow and evil celestia is the easiest to do otherwise I would be sitting in front of my desk trying to think up new ideas and won't have time writing this story
7469545 Its not a problem champ, keep doing what your doing.
I'm going to give everybody a clue to the next chapter. It is called miniature suns, if any body remembers their chemistry class it will make sense.
From my last comment to now. Pacing is too quick, in the story, with the character's dialogues, introspections and the level of casualness between Luna to just be surprised and not tearing the MC's mind apart upon meeting. Also your MC is a bit of a bit too quick to march off into war, I understand that as a fellow american, the idea of people being nothing more than property is enough to want to bash the big red button as hard as we can. But it comes in conflict with the strategist nature of his personality to just go full steam on day one.
Also you've never explained to how his base and personnel exist. Are they highly advanced golems, homunculi, phantasms or actual humans under contract from around the multi-verse to serve? And how is his base manifesting as it is? How is currency relevant to his situation in comparison to raw materials like oil when converting them as collateral for troops, vehicles and buildings? In your pursuit to get right into the conflict, you've made your MC bypass any inquisitive thoughts to take stock of his means of survival, and steered him straight past emotional turmoil of being sent away from his family and homeworld. Also I see you've transformed your MC into an adult, though this is a technicality to make a character physically legal, it saddens me if an author does this for the sake of their MC to fuck something later in the story.