Was about to go to sleep as I couldn't breathe last night as it was caused by a nasty cold but then saw this and read it. Few things I want to point out, first is the 'pink balloons' as they were white and then dipped into a bucket of pink paint. Is it me or does Pinke have instant paint drying paint as you said, the rest of the guest started putting them up. I think maybe say that they had to wait for maybe about 15 minutes for the paint to dry.

Second, what is CherryPie's hat look like. All we get is it's just a party hat but, what kind of party hat. A party hat that is blue with pink streamers around it or a pink one with blue streamers around it (couldn't really think of anything good as I'm tired from the lack of sleep).

Anyway, good chapter, just little nit picks here and there but over all, it's Ok

7504908 Happy someone finally caught that referance

7504868 It's Pinkie so you can be sure she has fast drying paint As far as CherryPie...

http://eremikashipper.deviantart.com/art/CherryPie-Vector-628286506

You can see what her cutie mark looks like here. I was actually listening to "A true, true friend" from season 3 when writing this, so I got a bit carried away and forgot to add in small details, but will be editing it.

“No mistakes, no delays! It has to be the most super, perfect foal shower ever!”, she continued.

foal shower story

how witers stress about stories

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If only i could find a better meme

Also; CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

Awesome work on the chapter!

7504958 So true! And thanks!

I was wondering. When r u going to do the next chapter? I love this story so much and can't wait to see what happens next

Leaving Dislikes won't make me a better writer. Don't like it? Move on. Leaving dislikes just discourages writers, and makes them feel like crap.

. True

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fully agree with this statement

When will the update come