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GundamBrony


Favorite Series - Kingdom Hearts, My Little Pony, Bionicle, Gundam, Kamen Riders. Love to Make Crossovers and hoping to make it the best.

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Book I

A new pony woke up in the middle of the Everfree Forest with no memories but only his name "John". While searching for his meaning here in Equestria, he begun to have strange powers not native to it as well as meeting a 'Princess' that convinced him that he was summoned by her to reclaimed Canterlot from the three evil princesses and bring peace to this land, thus don with new clothes, new powers, and new weapons, he now become "The Successor of the Dot Hackers", Kite Blade.

Meanwhile, Twilight began to learn of her new status as Princess at Canterlot however strange anomalies began to happen : Dragons from the roost somehow gone berserk and attacking Ponyville, ponies begin to see ghostly like figures at night, and ponies begin mysteriously disappeared. But when a encounter with a orange clad pony known as Kite Blade appeared and the strange report of missing items stolen from her friends' home and even her home too, she along with her friends soon facing him as now redeem by him to make this right, John now must adapt his life into his new home and to defend it from any threat and to discover his meaning of being here.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 17 )

whoa great story,please keep it up

I have never played any of the .hack games...I`m going to now.

Please, for everyone's sake, work on your grammar. The idea is amazing, but the grammar is broken.

4713182 I know that my grammar needs improvement but I'm doing my best.

Comment posted by GundamBrony deleted Oct 13th, 2014

4714226 Don't get me wrong; I love the story. It even made me re-watch the series again. But if it would be easier to get the content, then do grammar, do that. If you want to keep the reworking of the story to a minimum, you could start on it now. Just keep going, this deserves to be out there!

4729117 All right maybe once I'm done with this story I was wondering if you can be an editor for this story?

4734764 SO TEMPTING! I'll think about it. This deserves it, but maybe you should go with someone who has a bit more experience.:facehoof: I haven't even made mine public yet, since I'm doing so much editing. It's actually quite long for a beginning, being over 9,500 words. And I haven't even gotten much further than the introductions! See if you can find someone with experience who is having a writer's block. Editing is a great way to come up with new ideas. Ask around!:raritystarry:

whoa great new chapter buddy,thanks for writing great work please write more

Interesting story

5375015 Thanks, it's like a new .hack series and a crossover at a same time with my OC pony.

Princess selena form is cute. But the seperation between john and selena is like between master chief and cortana final moments

6503709 Yeah I got those inspirations from them and it's like a homage to them. It was the most saddest thing I ever seen.

6503760 yeah me too and i think that is the reason why master chief gone rouge in halo 5 to revive cortana

6503783 That's one possibility.

Que buen capitulo me hiso llorar:fluttercry:

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