Twilight gets sent back in time because of a magic mistake. She finds herself in the past when the Wonderbolts were founded. She needs to find a way to escape the past, without changing her future too much.
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Rocky Boulder
A Twilight fan. Cringe is my downfall ;(
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Great chapter I wounder if twilight we. E in the wounder bolts or not I hope there be a pairing keep up the good work update more soon
I'm sorry for posting the 3rd Chapter before time. I was meaning to post it a bit later, for I am still working on it.
Pegasus = one pegasus
Pegasi = more than one pegasus
You did it a sentence later:
Do you have an editor?
8129976 No, I write stories on Fimfiction. (Most people use Google Docs).
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Ok. Well, I'll point some stuff out in the future then if it's there.
8130826 Thank you.
Uh Oh, Twilight's been spotted while in her Alicorn form, what's she going to do now.
hurry up please.
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K. I will be posting a chapter every month.
I think in time I'll increase my story writing speed, but for now I will stick with chapter per month.
Nope. Shipping is fine
Wrong word. You mean through not threw. Threw is the past tense of throw. I see this mistake a lot here on this website and in fanfiction in general but it is the wrong word. At least this isn't as bad as all the 'throwns' I've seen people sitting on rather than 'thrones'.
Sign. Though. Sit. Just one went is enough.
Just 'lightning' not 'a lightning'. Again, wrong word and should be through.
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Thanks for the correction!
Minotaurs are bipedal. you need to fix that.
noose tightens.
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noose?
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yeah. they are getting closer to what she is.
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This one is like Iron Will. Deal with it.
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Iron will is bipedal too though
You should really consider revising this chapter. In fact, if you haven't already, you might want to to get an editor or something. It's not like your writing is illegible or you have several mistakes in every sentence or anything, but the errors in grammar and syntax are prevalent enough(and start early enough) that it'll be made unnecessarily harder for new readers to develop an initial interest in.
And here we go,
Cause since when did Twilight Sparkle ever fail?
This story isn’t dead, right?