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For some reason, I found this weirdly good.

It seemed well written, it's just the fact that it's vore that makes me uncomfortable saying it.

Keep up the good writing!

This makes basic biology curl into a corner and sob. :facehoof:

I was going to say 'the fuck did I just read', but this doesn't surprise me all that much. Too many video games.

7388434 didn't know it was. Spoilers don't show on my iPad. :facehoof: had a guess though.

7388455
Seriously, that is the number two worst problem I have with this site. (Number one is that the tagging system is complete balls.)

Well.

He found his fetish, so there's that.

Why did I read this again?

Fucked up Griffin faggots

This was quite well-written and thought-through, good job! The only thing I would do differently is add some more attention to the private regions, especially since you have the sex tag already... Maybe have Grass Eater orgasm for the second time as the gryphon filly was eating his stallionhood or exposing/tugging at his balls? That would have been hotter, at least in my opinion... But then again, it is quite good as it is ^^

7388455 Doh. Yeah, I have the same problem on my ipad, although you can highlight it and click 'define' and it'll show up as the title of the window or something like that.

7388356 That's stage 1. Stage 2 is watching horror movies. Stage 3 is an unstoppable descent into madness! :pinkiecrazy:

7389387 Yeah, I normally do this sort of thing as an RP scene where I only have to describe half the sex and I still struggle to find enough ways to describe it to keep it interesting. :ajsleepy:

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Duh, that's because vanilla sex is booooooring! Which is precisely why you need fucked up hardcore fetishy stuff to make it fun :pinkiecrazy:

Awesome Story. ^w^
But... would hav e at least liked to see gina and Trudy finish their meal.

Griffon rule is HARSH, dude. D:

7390574 I figure male griffons get sent out to fight monsters and bears and most of them die horribly, so at least it's fair. :trollestia:

You know... as much as I try to be open-minded about fetish - this is seriously fucked up... Pedophilia, raping, and such was one thing for fetishes, but THIS?! NOOOOOOO!!!!!!! Definately in the NO-zone, next to Necrophilia!!

And I know someone who just got added to the FBI watch list...

7390729 why hating on the necrophilia it's a victimless crime :pinkiecrazy:

7490787 Because when it comes to fetish, I vouch for sane, caring, and a place where I can fap to the fantasy without losing my morality... Necrophilia, Hard-Vore, all a big, fat, dickshaped, X. NO.

That was fucking hilarious. As far as snuff fics go, I can only assume that it was quite tame, and that totally worked in its favour. Still sexy too.
Brilliant story.
Have a like.

Didn't even day goodbye.

Rood

Goddamn, this was hot. I especially loved how cuddly and passionate they both were throughout, still humping even after his belly got split open, it was the perfect complement to the brutal hard vore. Only wish the little one had let him keep one eye so he could see everything, but it was a fantastically erotic sacrifice, much like Grass himself. I loved this, especially how it was close to consensual enough for my tastes, and if you're planning to write more in this vein then you've got a new follower!

This needs a sequel or something. The concept could make for a longer story.

This was a good read I hope to see more of that in the future.

Something about the entire dystopian theme of griffons ruling Equestria, sending the stallions off to die as they leave the mares alone with them, always has me coming back to this story... It's amazing, and I wish it could be expanded upon.

I think it actually played a large part in the inspiration I used to write my Zebra clopfic. Course, I was never able to make it as dark as this fic, but that would have made things that much hotter.

This was... remarkably hot and sexy. Honestly, if you gotta go, fucking your hot girlfriend before being eaten by her isn't the worst way. Heck, I'd like to see more 'griffins eat ponies' stores like this. If possible.

I don't want to seem like someone who does not was pay attention, but I really enjoyed the background of this story more, also the ending disturbed me a bit, not because of the blood and guts, but because they screwed in front of a minor, whatever, going back to the background, It is interesting to me how the griffons subdued equestrians, and they handle everything in an organized but cruel way, (but I love griffons as well as cruelty, they are my favorite race, more than those sappy colored horses), I really It would be interesting to see a more extended story in the concept of an equestria dominated by griffons, I really love the idea, especially knowing what happened to the main 6 and the princesses, did they fight bravely and were devoured in battle?, or did they surrender to save their ponies of annihilation and became a victory feast for the griffons? Who is the king or queen? What about hybrids? Surely they exist? Are they also sacrificed or are they considered citizens? Anyway, many interesting questions that will never be answered, 9.4 / 10.

Wouldn't mind seeing more stories set in this universe.

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