Off on a Tangent

MGuards and Monsters
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
Lyra joins the new Night Guard that Princess Luna is forming to hunt the monsters the Royal Guard can't or won't face
Gore
Sex
Luna
Diamond Tiara
Lyra
Bon-Bon
Pipsqueak
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Exuno

Exuno #1 · Oct 21st, 2014 · 2 · · And then, flowers. ·

Hm. Wouldn't Lyra just have to talk to Minuette? It was kind of a plot point that she escaped from the fragment world, so either there should be two of her running about, or remnants in her compound consciousness or something? Or she's just really bad at magic and only managed to accidentally kill three ponies (faster).

Anyway, I haven't really acknowledged it at all, but I like these. A lot! Lyra is amazingly characterized and her voice is so charming. She's weird and flawed and possibly, inherently wrong, but she's likeable and sweet and feels very much like a person.

terrycloth

terrycloth #2 · Oct 21st, 2014 · · · And then, flowers. ·

Yeah... maybe I'll cover Minuette (in passing) if I do another sequel.

PiMan

PiMan #3 · Oct 21st, 2014 · · · And then, flowers. ·

I'm not going to favourite this (or add it to any other bookshelf) because it isn't good enough for that, but I definitely think it is good enough for you to receive my first ever (intentional) thumbs up in this site. It deserves a better ratio than 3:3.

AetherToast