The New Griffon Empire

Novus6 #1 · Mar 11th, 2017 · 3 · 1 · The Bird King's March ·

This is a great concept for a story, but there are grammar/spelling issues everywhere, the storyline seems sort of clunky and awkward, and some parts need much more detail than you are giving them.

The Dark Prophet

The Dark Prophet #2 · Mar 12th, 2017 · 3 · 1 · State of Affairs ·

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I am well aware of that, I do not have an editor and though I did look over it for mistakes, some are bound to slip through the cracks and I also know some parts are awkward... Probably could've handled it better, but alas, no one's perfect.

Master Assassin Chris

Master Assassin Chris #3 · Mar 13th, 2017 · 2 · 9 · State of Affairs ·

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Seriously. I hate this fucking fic and I hope it tanks with all the dislikes you sick individual.

Dark Lord Nox

Dark Lord Nox #4 · Mar 16th, 2017 · 1 · 8 · The Bird King's March ·

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So griffons deciding to eat ponies. Seriously? And "green rock" that affects pony magic? Real original idea there. Honestly this story already sucks.

Dark Lord Nox

Dark Lord Nox #5 · Mar 16th, 2017 · · 9 · State of Affairs ·

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Now it makes sense why this story has a great number of dislikes. That tends to happen when you kill off fandom characters and main characters. To top all that garbage off you add in necrophilia? You are one disgusting individual and I honestly don't think you should be considered part of the fandom anymore. I've seen some dark works and understand why events take place but the level of this is appalling. This story is definitely nothing more than garbage.

Dark Lord Nox

Dark Lord Nox #6 · Mar 26th, 2017 · 1 · 9 · The Bird King's March ·

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Watching this story soak up the dislikes shows your incompetence as a writer and brings a smile to my face.

The Dark Prophet

The Dark Prophet #7 · Mar 26th, 2017 · 9 · 1 · State of Affairs ·

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I don't know what you think you've accomplished, but this was never meant to be liked. It contains content that is not widely approved, and there is a warning so complaining about it makes no sense, don't like it? Don't read it. Plain and simple.

And you think a few dislikes bother me? No, that is irrelevant; I only wish more of you would complain, your pathetic whining pleases me greatly, and the only reason I'm even acknowledging you is so the annoying gnat stops feeling so empowered for accomplishing nothing, but please feel free to complain some more, I'm sure that will be a productive use of your time.

Dark Lord Nox

Dark Lord Nox #8 · Mar 27th, 2017 · 1 · 10 · State of Affairs ·

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Very amusing you dark little troll. However this " empowered gnat" as you eloquently put it has plenty of time productively point out your fails. Funny way to think you insulted me but nothing empowers me more then bashing the works of trolls like you. But by all means though keep posting more of this pathetic garbage you call a story, and I will be sure to let you know exactly what I think of it. It's pathetic though that you would seek attention this way by trolling on a beloved fandom as you are, but parasites don't care for their actions. All you are and ever will be is a hack with no real skills or aim in life who gets pleasure in trying to ruin what others enjoy. Listen well troll, karma takes great delight in delivering her dues to your kind. You could spare yourself that humiliation as well as further discontent from others though. Do this site and the MLP fandom a favor and take down these sick and twisted shams you pass off as stories then find the highest point you can and jump off into an abyss like a good little knob job.

Primalhunter

Primalhunter #9 · Oct 23rd, 2017 · 9 · 1 · State of Affairs ·

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You can see how he's actually angry, people write long-winded excuses on why they're not bothered at all when they're actually all bothered. kek m8

the story was hot, necrophilia is boring most of the time, but you made it interesting
lol