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After one trillion years, after all the hard work Bill had been erased. Or so the residents of Gravity Falls thought. He might not be in their dimension or the Nightmare Realm but he is still alive in another plane of existence.

Will the all seeing, all knowing eye learn true friendship or will he bring the oddpocalypse?

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I like it. Grammar could use a little work here and there, but otherwise it looks good so far. I'll be watching.

7223411 Thanks, I know my grammar isn't the best and I try to improve it. Like I said in the Author's Note, if you want a backstory to Bill then you have the link given.

7223424 Thanks. Try 'Flat Dreams', believe me. That story if worth a read.

Wat.

The other Bill-In-Equestria fic went on hiatus, and this one is here now.

Boy, oh boy.

EDIT: I've read the first few sentences and I'm already cringing.

I'll try to hold out though.

7232857 Which Bill fic do you mean? 'Meet Bill Cipher' was it's name, right?

I WANT MOAR! also have some music i listen to when im feeling meh...

7232926 when i find a story i like i just add it to my chapters undread so when one comes out i can read

7235598 Heh, just like me. You know what I find surprising? That there isn't one, single dislike. Is my Bill story that good?

7235610 well ppl like it because.. who dose not like fucking gravity falls?

7241791 True but other Gravity Falls fics on this site have got dislikes.

7242639 *Shoves bread in your mouth* that will do pig that will do

"Remember! Friendship is an illusion, cutie marks are a hologramm, you're all Celestia's puppets, bye!"

here lays
Frisk dreemurr
Savior of the underground
and beloved one
2XXX-2XXX
Died by laughter

This is about my favorite illuminati Dorito please make more chapters

7492537 I am still trying to get an idea for the next chapter so you must wait a bit.

I wanting to see Discord battle Bill
I mean Bill mite be an all powerful being but Discord is still the Lord of Chaos he could defiantly put up a fight

7492716 Shenanigans ensue; presumably, some fun little number occurs, where Bill appears in Magic's dream to offer a solution to the (rapidly approaching) Green Wedding. Naturally, this goes as well as can be presumed, with Bill doing to her, as he did with Pine Tree.

Of course, if you're talking about trouble with next chapter's content, you could always have it being a chain of actions that resolve, perhaps a few chapters later, with Discord forming a alliance with the Mane Six (and maybe the Princestuous Diarchy, assuming he wants to make poke at them in just the right manner for responses to consist of shocked and appalled denials, with maybe Luna shouting that it was a different time, and things weren't like they are now, if you want to go for that vaguely comedic route).

Of course, Bill will be making deals with varying characters, like Gilda, Lightning Dust, Trixie, FlimFlam Bros, Some Wonderbolts (if you don't mind manufacturing some drama within the team, since the whole disloyalty amongst the team is apparent with the whole Equestria Games Incident when Soarin got injured), and maybe Prince Blueblood or some nobles. Babs Seed might be easy pickings, and if you want to make Scoots an orphan, you got an easy target that's close to the Mane Six. He could play on the insecurities that made Luna create the Tantabus, towards the end, allowing him to open the Rift, creating Weirdmageddon II. He could target Moondancer as an alternative Pine Tree. Azathoth forbid, if you want to make EqG canon to your fic, or just incorporate some of it's elements, you could easily nab Sunset as an interesting piece in a story Arc.

Point is, there's a lot you could do, and many ways to go about it; it literally all depends on where you're taking this fic, and what you want to do with it. The question isn't "what am I going to do this chapter?" It's, "how do I want this to end, and what steps do I take to make that a satisfying conclusion?"

It's been fun talking, hope to hear your response!:twilightsmile:

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WOWEE KAZOWEE! I wonder how the ponies will react when Bill unleashes the Weridpocolypse on them. It would make every villain, ancient or new, in the history of ponydom seem like ants by comparison to a blue whale and an Argentinosaurus's sizes combined, biggest possible limit.

By the way, you're story should have had a new chapter by now.

ALL OF THEM!

8208987 I see your Pop Culture reference, and I raise you a Stroke-Recovery-Fueled Procrastination.

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What do you mean by a pop culture reference? I really don't know.

8210250 "ALL OF THEM!" is the reference I referred to. Couldn't really tell where it's from, but I remember seeing it used a couple of times in videos, wherein it was used like a memetic piece of reference humor.

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I've made a pop culture reference without even thinking about it! XD

But what is a S.R.F.P.?

8210298 A half joke: I'm holding off on continuing my writing, until I feel I've sufficiently recovered from my recent stroke. It's taking me noticeably longer to remember something I know that I have memory of, assuming I remember it at all. It's a bit harder to verbalized concepts more complicated than "this is what physically happened;" if it's a complex or abstract thought, it takes me a bit to come up with the words to communicate it. Before, I could've had this written in half the time it's taken me to type this paragraph. I think I'll be able to manage shortly, and nothing's been cancelled, but I'll need a couple weeks, max, to start up again, and less than a month to have something posted, considering all my writing on this site, this far, are going to be large, complex works, each with entire worlds, and (in some cases, omniversi.

Hey! I have an excellent idea for the chapter titles.

1: My time has come to burn!
2: I invoke the ancient power so I may return!
3: You thought I was done for, think again, pal!
4: Big things are coming!
5: I have BIG plans next round!
6: But let me tell you something...
7: This party never stops,
8: So welcome one and all,
9: Welcome to Weirdmageddon 2.0!

Think of that!

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I'm happy to help. We've been waiting for a long, long time. You can use my ideas for the chapter names, thank me for it. 'Twas my idea.

Please continue this, I really like it..!

You ponies are nothing compared to Bill Cipher.

Taking one last look at the group, he spread his arms. "Remember! Friendship is an illusion, cutie marks are a hologramm, you're all Celestia's puppets, bye!" And with one, bright flash, he was gone.

Yup, that's our boy Bill Cipher alright.

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