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I used to question the MLP FiM show, but one episode and I got hooked on it. See my Fanfiction account ChaosMagemon for more than just MLP fics. Joined the Herd Nov 5, 2011

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This story is a sequel to The Pony Ghostbusters


Four months have passed since the Ghostbusters mission in Equestria. Now they must return to protect it from the ghost of Nightmare Moon who still desires to make nighttime eternal in the land. Will the boys and and ponies defeat this ghostly monster, or will all of Equestria fall into eternal darkness?

Continuation from The Pony Ghostbusters If you've not read it, then you will not understand this one.

Chapters (6)
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Comments ( 30 )

May thy stop nightmare moon

Can't resist but think this song:

I hope Nightmare gets her just dues quickly. I'd love to see what happens when she gets thrown into the containment chamber with her 'lesser'.
~All hail King Sombra.~

4664777 Yes and I am thankful for you giving it to me

Nice, I can't wait to see what happens next :pinkiesmile:

Awesome way to finish her and I liked the final words between Luna and Nightmare Moon :pinkiehappy:

Well, seems like I have another epilogue to write.

4695013 If you do I would be very grateful :pinkiehappy:

I wish someone got slimed at end but great ending. 9/10

4695019 MAKE MORE OF THESE!!!! THEY'RE 20% COOLER MORE AWESOME!!!!

The beginning seems a bit rushed and it felt weird that the sisters immediately made the decision to call the Ghostbusters without making sure that they were actually dealing with a ghost.

6632290 Ghost or not, Nightmare Moon was still a supernatural entity, and the Ghostbusters handle those too.

Comment posted by TJHoofer deleted Nov 16th, 2015

6632790 True. It's just that normally in a Ghostbuster story (in this case a MLP/Ghostbuster story), a ghost has to first make a move and then become a real problem that only the Ghostbusters can handle. Kind of like Sombra was presented.

Here it was more a precognitive dream, followed suddenly by 'Call the Ghostbusters'. A bit too quick of a decision, but that's just my opinion...

Loved. It. I just have to say that I really enjoyed your first story, and this one was just as good! I liked how you incorporated the "Rookie" from the video game as well as his proton pack into it! Great job! :pinkiehappy: :twilightsmile: :ajsmug: :raritywink:: raritystarry:

6638378
Technicaly if you remember Tirek and how he was introduced the dream was a vision of what actually happened, and Nightmare moon is an eternal threat with her whole eternal night plan.

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I kind of like it when you put rookie on it. I like that character

I'm not sure if it's nesserary for Discord to be in the story but it seems to be a great story so far

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