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Black Hailstorm


A never-ending storm of ideas

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My name is Hailstorm, and I've made a terrible mistake, one that I don't think I'll ever be able to apologize enough for till I've fixed it. Fixing this problem is the only solution I have to redeem myself, if I ever want to look in a mirror again or ever want to sleep. I just have to say...I'm sorry.

I never meant for this to happen. I just wanted it to stop, I just wanted those dreams to end. But when I found out the real purpose, of his goal I brought him here. And for that I can't apologize enough. So I'm going to redeem myself, even if it costs me my last breath.


In a alternate universe where Hailstorm's curse forces him to peer into the world of Gravity Falls the human sees things- sees symbols that bother him incessantly. Unable to stand the torment his mind is taking the young adult writes said symbols on the wall, summoning a being of great power, with a desire for even greater chaos. In a strange twist of fate Hailstorm realizes his mistake and forms a deal to spare his world of the turmoil he has brought, but instead sends himself and the being known as Bill Cipher to the world of Equestria.

Now Bill Cipher is free in a different world, but must rest temporarily while he gathers the necessary ingredients to bring Equestria into ruin. It is now up to Hailstorm, and another lord of chaos to solve this problem. The only question is will they really be able to outsmart the all knowing triangle, or will they find some way to defeat this being together, with the elements of harmony and one daring pegasus?

Only time will tell.


Additional Tags: Dark, Mystery, Possible Romance, Drama, Psychological.

Additional Characters: Starlight Glimmer, Princess Luna, Screwball etc.

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 38 )

Great start, I can't wait for more.

Darn I know it's real late and all but Happy belated Thanksgiving

OMG OF COURSE! WHY DIDN'T I CONNECT THE DOTS EARLIER?! UGH! I SHOULDA REALIZED THAT STANFORD WOULD BE THERE AT SOME POINT! THE FING PORTAL! HE MUSTA LANDED IN EQUESTRIA AFTER STANLEY THREW HIM IN! UGH I WAS SO STUPID!

Awwwwwweeeeessssssommmmmeeeeee! *pulls a silverquill* CONTINUITY!

I'm confused... Is Hailstorm from another story or something? (I haven't read the story, I'm just going by the synopsis.)

6733275 Hailstorm is indeed from another story. His ability is based off my first story here, but don't worry I'll be sure to explain his curse and everything when the time is right.

Wow. Cliffhanger, much? Thanks a lot :P:derpytongue2:

6740630 wow. Didn't expect a reply so quickly, and so late at night (where I am anyways). Also, they need a sarcasm emote. :ajbemused:

6740806 I meant for ME! Also, please stop killing my feels with cliffhangers, Celestia damn it!

SCOOBY-DOOBY-DOO, WHERE ARE YOU...

6749035 This guy, this guy gets it :moustache:

Ummm what even...

6768811 Not really sure where the confusion is coming from

6768854 the way hailstorm was acting

6768922 At the end like when he changes back to his equine form or in general? I'm not exactly sure which part you're referring to unless it's specific.

I've been wondering if there will be a fight between Bill and someone else soon.

6770973 His body heats up in sort of like a defense mechanism, due to all the injuries and how much he exerted himself, its his body way of protecting him from pushing himself any further and to keep anything dangerous away from him. It only did this due to Bill's magic, since it activated as he began changing form and stopped once he'd reverted back into a pony.

Sooo.... Discord is in league with Bill? Does that mean Discord is a villain in this story, or what?

6794088
Answers will come in due time

NO YA BLOODY DON'T BILL!

6838912 Glad someone gave me a reaction from that. Was beginning to wonder if I gave that one away or something in earlier chapters.

6839108 Nah, I just know the way Bill works.

Celestia nodded. “There are four gods who created Equus, and Fourteen minor gods who represent our world. But Starswirl was always one for theory, when he couldn’t find hard proof or evidence on what he wanted. There’s been no such proof of gods or goddesses ever existing.”

And here I thought the mighty Fausticorn created Equus... Guess Celestia doesn't know her own Mother...

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Kangaroo Isle huh? I hear that place is really hopping!

WHO IS HAILSTORM AND WHY SHOULD I CARE ABOUT HIM?

EXPLAIN YOURSELVES.

Never mind, but you do need a proofreader.

A few hours ago I read chapter 17 and now here is a new one. What a surprise.

7014776 I'm just full of surprises lately.

HEHEHEHEHE

Starlight + Bill = Starbight

Oh the chaos HEHEHEHE

oh golly. this ain't gonna end well

and... i'm confused

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