• Member Since 25th Sep, 2015
  • offline last seen Jan 11th, 2018

Grasshopper Keller


Just a Colorado brony who makes some good stories. Celestia and Pinkie Pie are best ponies!

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And now... R.D. is last! But she will be given as much love as I can muster! :twilightsheepish:

I don't know why you keep putting that 2nd person tag there if you are just going to give him a name with should be the readers names. Look it not hard to make one, sorry for this plug right here but I just made one that was a real second person story if you are going to give him a name just make it third or first.

This is a nice little story you have here, my friend. Short, sweet, and to the point. :raritywink:

Looking forward to reading more. In the meantime, have another root beer. *gives root beer bottle* Cheers mate! *starts drinking my own*

Wait. What about Twilight?

7145684 I put in a name to the 'Anon' characters because that name is just so bland, in my opinion. But not only that, it's just a small cover for the same name. Anyone can say 'Anon', but I wanted to give a real pony-like name to the characters. I hope you still liked this story though.

7145815 *takes a chug of the soda* Aahhh.... Thank you for that! :pinkiesmile:

7145931 After Rainbow is finished, Sci-Twi will get her debut. So don't worry and don't panic; Everything is gonna be okay!

This is good. But it feels really rushed compared to the earlier ones.

This is why AJ is my favorite:twilightsheepish:

Wonderfull story good job be waiting for more

A bit rushed, but you have potential. I am no clop writer, but I say this as a clop enthusiast.

7148644 I thank you, my new friend! It is rushed, but I feel that time is always against me, soo.... Here! *hands out a bottle of beer* Have a beer on me! :pinkiehappy:

7148043 Hello there. I don't know you, but I feel that you might need a beer and a cookie! Here! *hands out a beer bottle and a cookie* Have a beer and a cookie! :pinkiehappy:

Lets see here... I feel like a big chunk is missing between the confession and the intercourse, also spotted a few typos but i can deal with those,overall good story i liked it, and now on to the last one.

*reads story, gets to the authors note, squee like a plush toy :pinkiehappy:

a story where they all get together.
Good Idea

I would recommend doing these stories over and adding some length and development to them. As they are now they are far too short.

hooray for cider!!!:pinkiecrazy:
woot!:trollestia:

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