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Neophyte
If you are reading this, then you have been in my crosshairs for at least five minutes.
Neophyte
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Seems legit
Only one chapter?
@bloodwolf432
Yes, sorry. It is my first time around here and I had no idea how to add a story in the beginning.
I actually am contemplating on making a part two.
Big Mac was REALLY out of character. And pretty much everyone was out. To be completely honest, it was a bad story in my opinion. Would say more if it didn't hurt for me to type
EDIT: Sorry for the large image.
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Oh well. First time for everything. Thanks for the feedback.
Not bad.
Earth pony magic.
I'm gonna keep reading and pretend that never happened.
@Camokkid
That was a easter egg from the show. It was an animation error in an episode in which Daisy, an Earth Pony, moves around some branches "magically" even though she had no little horn thing.
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My face at the end was a soft smile
I think you succeeded in creating a cute story!
Thank you, cum again!
@RohanSpartan
Thanks! That was quite possibly the best use of Dr. Chakwas I've seen other than her sitting in the Med Bay.
@richfiles
Thanks!
So OOC even by clop-logic standards. It was kinda unbearable.
748112
I don't want you to be mad at me; I just want to make sure you know this.
To reply to someone make sure you press the "double chat bubbles" (heh
) at the far right of a post. Cool? 
As for the story, pretty nice for a first story. I've been here for awhile now and haven't bother making one, so you're already better than me.
May your next be better
>>NaturalGlitch
Thanks for the feedback. Your avatar kinda sums up your comment.
>>Marq Harrihoof
Thanks. Sorry about that.
>"Think long and hard before lying to me."
Hehe long and hard.
Dafuq?
Sorry but everypony was so OoC. Earth pony magic? Twilight reading a Rarity-type book in defiance to the princess? Big Mac talking?
Also it was another "and then they fucked" fic. Clop wasn't half bad though...
Please do add more stories like these. You sir, are a good clop writer
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big mac was out of character also twilight you might need to work on that
Oh god pinkie pie and cupcakes *shivers* I hope its not what i think it is
win!
748410 Don't Like?
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Not to sound like a hater, but everyone was ridiculously out of character.
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nice man loved it :3
all I have to say :P
I'm at the begining, and I can't stop laughing at the fact that Twilight stalks people as her hobby.
Excellent. I actually didn't think either were too far out of character. Big Mac was still fairly quite, and Twilight was still the adorkable, bookish mare we all love.
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I'm not too sure either...
Great story, I enjoyed reading it to my friends, and we all got a good laugh out of it, so thank you, may Luna be with you
hmm I liked everything, but twilight's orgasmic yelling killed me! i could stop laughing!
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I'm confused why someone would think I was a troll. It was an honest compliment. I loved the story. I read a couple comments about them being completely out of character. Your personalities for Big Mac and Twilight were what I would imagine they'd be, if the show was of a more mature nature. Twilight was still looking into books and Big Mac was polite as ever. Just dat sex. You writing wasn't exactly amazing, but it was above par. I liked the story enough to consider it excellent. Take a compliment.
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Sorry about that. After looking at all the "Out of Character" comments, I was a little hesitant to believe someone thought otherwise.
Thanks for the clarification.
I fail to see how Mac or Twilight was out of character more so with Big Mac since there really isn't much to him. It's easy to say Twilight wouldn't do something because she doesn't seem like she would do it but how can anyone really judge? No one could guess Pinkie had a darker more insane side because she's always happy and no one could guess that Fluttershy had a more assertive side because she's always timid.
How about everyone stop assuming they know all there is to know about the ponies and just enjoy some good ol' fashioned clop?
970962
Umm, dude, I think at least 75% of bronies knew (or assumed)
I'm Keiro Mac and I approve this story.
lolwhut
As long as Diamond Heist involves Diamond Tiara flying down a helicopter face-first to the ground, than I am okay with this.
1056560
I'm not sure if that is positive or not...
1056564
That'd...good to know...I think...
I'm so confused.
1057094 He was Referencing Payday: The heist because one of the levels is called Diamond Heist and the fic is called Payday. And that was neither positive or negative, it was neutral.
1060832
Okay. Thanks for clearing that up...
I feel silly now
Uhhhhhhhh... okay?
1177475
What did I do?
1183153 ooc twilight(out of character)
Legit, Hot, Approved!!!
more please
Thanks, I needed that laugh.
Wonder if the whole "gas your partner to make him him agree" was part of the book though, or just a really weird initiative of Twi.