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7051270 But there was zero suicide in this fic. But I mainly just wrote it to kill writers block over the course of an hour and figured I'd post it.
I'm seriously expecting the worse.
7051288 Hm... Alright. Revoking submission. I'll see what I can do.
7051320 Oops... I'm a spontaneous and drastic fellow who takes criticism to heart! If somethings bad, my first thought it to burn it and make it better without any hesitation, then feel horrible about it later!
7051288 Better ish? I'm not sure by what you really meant by building it up.
7051367 Well they're on Earth. I don't believe in god, but still use the phrase "oh god" because of what it means and is used for. I suspect that over all that time the terminology would seep into their words.
But the whole point of this was trying to get more into the mindset for a different fic. I just couldn't get into the right mindset for it, and wrote this as an attempt to get into it. Figured I'd publish it but now I wish I'd never even started writing today.
Gah, this entire thing has been a roller coaster, curse my inability to make a bloody decision!
7051379 Isn't Equestria Girls earth just a Earth? I always saw it as such so...
7051392 I dunno, maybe a slightly different Earth? Okay, well you got me there. I've never really given it much more thought than, "Oh well they seem to have all of Equestria in two high schools, so I guess the rest of the state/province is just their planet? The rest of that must be actual Earth."
7051423 Hm. I suppose that's a difference in opinions though, not an actual issue with the story.
Can we get alternate endings? 1 with Sonata the one dead and another with Aria dead?
7051529 You can if you write it! If you want to copy the rest and just rewrite the end, I wouldn't mind posting it on here after editing it, but that's entirely on you.
7051540 Maybe.
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7051574 But I'm not a writer though
7051620 Anyone who can read a story and understand it can be a writer. Anyone who ever thought, "I wish this had happened instead" is writing a small story in their brain, all you have to do is put it on (metaphorical) paper. All it takes is that one first step. Always listen to critiques if they're actual critiques, never fall victim to flames or utter hatred. To write is to give the world a piece of yourself, and like any other thing in the world, it will hurt most of the time. But when it doesn't, it's beautiful.
Beyond anything of what I just said, to be a writer you just write. If you ever pause it loses it's luster and you have to find it again. It's not a very easy thing, but it builds and displays amazing things when done correctly. Please, if you at least try to write one of the scenarios, I'll personally write my own version of the one you pick and post both on here, or you can post yours on your account. Please, just try.
7051628 I'll try but the hardest part for me is how to put an idea together(Exhibit A: Rewriting code more then once before getting other code started).
7051663 Just try your hardest, okay? I believe in you.
Woah. I see what you mean. Holy crow.
Fantastic work, seriously. Man, I think it's even more heartwrenching than mine, dang...
7276747 Nah. Yours is better.
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Nah. Yours adds in the element of accidentally killing someone else that you loved instead of yourself... That's more heartwrenching.
7276762 I suppose... But I still really liked yours.