Dead Melody

Octavia is attending Vinyl's funeral, after bitterly waiting everypony to leave, Princess Luna, a friend of Vinyl's, shows up and tries her best to comfort Octavia.

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brandonvortex

brandonvortex #1 · Sep 5th, 2015 · · ·

okay how did vinyl dead anyway?

Pathos14489

Pathos14489 #2 · Sep 5th, 2015 · · ·

6393271 I'm not entirely sure actually.. I have a few ideas of how, but I intentionally left a few chunks of the story open so the reader could just fill it in however they wanted. But I suppose I could actually figure out how Vinyl died, perhaps post that as a new chapter or a different fic? What do you think?

brandonvortex

brandonvortex #3 · Sep 5th, 2015 · · ·

6395639 i think post a new chapter i supposed that she died maybe because of uncureable sickness. perhaps a flashback in next chapter how it happen before couple few weeks she began to get sick

at first octiva thought it was just a normal sickness then in matter of few weeks it gets worst soo when they visited the doctor vinyl got a rare and also uncurable but dangerous sickness

SpiritOfDancingFlames

SpiritOfDancingFlames #4 · Jun 3rd, 2016 · · ·

Wow.. I've read a lot of cut-and-paste "Vinyl/Octavia died, the other one is left sad and alone" fics, but this is one of the best ones I've ever seen. I especially love how Octavia reacted, because I know I'd react in much the same way. My Special Somepony... If I ever lost her, I'd lose it. I really, truthfully would, and the way Octavia is reacting seems very real. Brilliant work.
This is the second fic of yours that I've read, and I'm finding that I like your sense of tone, pacing, and reality. It's refreshing, and I mean that seriously.
Yours,
~Spirit

Pathos14489

Pathos14489 #5 · Jun 3rd, 2016 · · ·

Such kind people

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Pathos14489

Pathos14489 #6 · Jun 3rd, 2016 · · ·

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Thank you for reading and enjoying what I write on here. I've never really had someone say something quite like your review here and your review on Letters about something I made. It feels amazing. It's why I wanted to write, to inspire people the same way many stories I've read have done. Thank you so much.

SpiritOfDancingFlames

SpiritOfDancingFlames #7 · Jun 3rd, 2016 · · ·

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On the contrary - Thank you, so much, for writing these. You're a brilliant author.
As for nopony else saying something quite like my review, well, shame on everypony else! Dishonor on them, dishonor on their cow...
In all seriousness, I'm glad that I've made you happy I love making people happy. Yes, I may have some fairly dark stories, but I am a very happy person. I get happy when I help others to be happy! I guess I have a little more Pinkie in me than I thought