One day Princess Twilight starts getting letters from a filly named Sunny Skies. Dealing with her paranoia, OCD, "Princess Chores" and just simple worrying, how is Twilight supposed to help a young filly make friends? And when the letters start to worry her, how will Twilight cope as she investigates into a darker side of Equestrian society.
this looks like it shall be interesting.
also
6948243 Thank you. And... I will admit that I, the author who wrote that, even laughed at it. Which is horrible and I shouldn't laugh at my own jokes. XD
6948262 I laugh at mine in my own stories all the time, granted mine aren't this time of joke as my stories are a lot different then yours but if you don't find enjoyment in your own stories then why write?
6948272 True. But I'm usually a very humble person who thinks everything he does sucks. It's rare I actually find real joy and happiness with what I write. I usually find it very inadequate.
6948281 know exactly how that feels good sir. as I said earlier I think I'm a terrible right and don't know why people like my work.
6948288 I'll give a few of your stories a read after I'm done catching up with school later and be the judge of that.
6948298 feel free though mine are dark for a different reason then yours as you will probably see when you look at them.
well one is dark a lot like yours the rest are dark for other reasons.
6948303 I like various kinds of dark, so lets just see.
6948318 well as I said feel free and I hope you find something you like.
I finished reading the chapter just as the music you linked to finished. Success!
Would she know how to use the enchanted parchment?
well then this should be interesting, and who care if it's short? I'm just happy for an update of quality.
7003203 In my head, the way Celestia sends letters through spike is by simply finishing the letter. The enchantment realizes that the writer is done and poof.
At least to me anything.
7003224 Thanks. I'll try to make it longer next time around.
Update!
Yes I know I'm late. I blame loosing my phone.
7007010 It's okay, don't worry! Thanks for reading.
Twi...
7033104 *nods*
got to love what Fort Book is used as an actual defensive structure.
7033112 Fortenheit 451* But yes.
why do I get the feeling Sunny Skies is either in a hospital for the terminally ill or a mental institution?
also loved the opening and her freak out.
some times I hate being right.
also
YES!
7071617 Thank you for catching that reference.
Twilight=Starbutt
So true.
7071683 A lot of my humor is taking for popular bits of the fandom and twisting them. XD Like, PONY.MOV or terms for ponies only bronies use, or FiW. ...Or Doctor Who and Project Horizons.
Okay...
This poor filly really needs Twi now that we know the drill.
7071810 Nods
well.....that escalated quickly....jeez......
7075081 It really did. It realllllly did.
Okayy...
That was...interesting.
7075188 In a good or bad way?
7075267 I don't even know anymore...
7075277 I don't know how to respond to that!
And the tension keeps getting thicker.
7094898 And you know what they say about thick tension.
Sooo, we'll finally have answers?
7125913 Maybe.
did she just perform a mind meld with her?
7125956 Something like that.
7126235 when did Twi become a Vulcan?
7126241 She did demonstrate memory manipulation magic at least once in the show. She really tends to like messing with ponies and creatures minds. So I figured it fit.
First chapter got my upvote. Now I have a problem.
I need another upvote button. I wish there was one upvote button per chapter.
I have a feeling this will turn out to be amazing. On to the next one.
Interesting.. I can't wait to find out what sort of place Sunny's in.
oh.
7094906
...I really hope it's not what I'm thinking... that.. you can cut it with a knife?
If it is, I'm scared now.
...
...
Please keep writing this. I beg you. Please. I.. I dunno if my life will ever be right again until I know what happens..
This is an amazing story. Mental illnesses/disorders and the like are always one of my favorite subjects, partly because I have some. It's hard to explain, but.. it can make for some of the most amazing stories ever written.
This is one of them. I am completely and utterly drawn in to the story, and all I want is to know more. It is amazing, you are amazing, and so is Lily.
Please keep writing this.
Yours,
~Spirit
7271069 I know your pain, but my story isn't deserving of that.
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7271107 Best response to this chapter I've seen.
7271118 Be afraid. Be very afraid.
7271130
I do plan to continue this fic, believe me. I hate to leave things unfinished, even though I have a bad habit of it... But at the moment, I'm in a bit of a stalled mind. I can't write lately for some reason... I just stare at the blank page with zero thoughts popping up...
But please, know that I appreciate this review so very much. Thank you for the kind words.
I really feel like it's... Not very well presented though.
But again, thank you.
~Pathos