After Tirek’s attack, a unicorn named Silver Streak found himself traumatized and afraid, even after the Bearers of the Elements of Harmony returned magic to Equestria. After doing some research, he decided to move from his hometown, Fillydelphia, to Ponyville, home of the Element Bearers and the only place in Equestria he felt he could be safe.
Having spent years dedicated to the study of magic, Silver’s only goal is to practice his spells and become a powerful wizard, but that dream will change when he makes new friends in Ponyville who show him that there is more to life than his books and spells. Soon he will come to learn that life can be more beautiful and fulfilling than he ever thought possible.
Join Silver Streak and his friends as they live their lives in the small, and often crazy, town of Ponyville.
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An episodic tale, starting at the beginning of Season 5 and continuing on from there.
Cover artwork was made by NortherntheStar.
Story artwork was made by Nstone53
This story have potential. I will track thee.
7052032 Thank you. I hope you enjoy it.
Interesting, from what the description pertains anyways.
I'll put it on "read-later". Not particularly high priority on my read list, but you've caught my attention.
7058434 I hope you like it. I plan on updating every-other week, so look for Episode 2 in a couple weeks.
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Glad to hear it.
Things are getting interesting. I wonder how he would react in being the center of a crazy situation in Ponyville. Probably run and hide.
7103085 Depends on the situation, really. He wants to be a great wizard, so he might rush into danger thinking that it's his responsibility to help.
His color scheme doesn't make me cringe and his name fits his role without breaking continuity? What god did I pray to in order to have such fortune bequeathed upon me?
This suburban neighborhood is too dangerous for my taste, time to move next to the Everfree Forest.
He notes the craziness of the town, and then hopes it's peaceful and quiet? Art thou insane?
Surprisingly passive for having cake shot at him.
Let's see, I've only saved the world like... four times? Maybe three if you don't include Sombra.
I actually threw enough magic at Tirek to level half of Manehattan.
Please fuck this guy up in many ways. I want to see a corrupt Silver Streak now.
I will personally maim you if him or any of his friends become "elements" or "alicorns".
Not bad.
7/10 so far
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Well considering a certain group of ponies there seem to beat up anything and everything that comes calling, yeah, I'd say it's pretty safe.
Well to be fair, most of the time I'd assume that Ponyville is pretty quiet, but when it goes crazy it goes REALLY crazy.
Well I mean, I don't think I'd know how to react to getting a frosted cake fired into my face after a whole song and dance...
Yeah, no, not going to be that kind of story. Granted, Silver DOES have some issues that we'll see down the line, but he's not turning into the next Sombra.
I'm trying to make this story as close to canon as I can, so that's never going to happen. Besides, now that Twilight Sparkle and her friends are all basically LINKED with the Elements of Harmony, I don't see any way of anypony else getting them. Aside from Sunset Shimmer, apparently...
I'm glad you're liking it. I would have hoped it'd rate a better score, but I suppose there's a point or two deducted for the whole "OC moves into Ponyville" thing, huh? At least I worked hard on having a real reason for him to move there, instead of just because!
Modifying magic is interesting.
Well, I read the first chapter, and I have to say that it's pretty good for your first story. It's sound on a grammatical and mechanical level, and is also easy to read. You actually surprised me, as you took an overused idea (Pinkie Pie throws party for new pony in town), and made it not feel stagnant. Once again, good job, and I look forward to seeing more!
7141362 I'm glad you're liking it so far. Let me know what you think as the series progresses, and please leave a like if you enjoy it.
Quick Silver ask her out before you missed your chance!
The story is looking good so far.
I'm enjoying the character interactions and the little situational humor here and there. Looking forward to more!
7227784 I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Please, if you know anyone who'd enjoy it as well, then I'd appreciate it if you could send them over. I have so few people actually reading my story, so it'd be nice to get more readers.
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I can send a tweet out on my Twitter to see if anyone would be interested in it.
7252035 That'd be cool, thank you.
Oh c'mon Jewel tell Mystic already or so help me Luna...
7262657 Ah, yes, the great question that plagues Equestria; Will Jewel ever have the courage to tell Mystic how she feels? Only time will tell!
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It is done. Sorry it took me so long to get around to it.
7281829 I appreciate it, thank you. Have you been enjoying the series so far?
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Yes, I have been enjoying it.
I like how you're starting to branch out to the other ponies points of view in the most recent chapter. It's a good way to keep things fresh and interesting.
Also, you broke out of the gray bar. 8 upvotes and 3 downvotes so far isn't too bad for your first story.
7293263 My hope is to have some episodes focusing on the other characters, just like in the show. Admittedly I've got to work out more ideas for the other ponies in the group, which would be easier if I had an editor to bounce ideas off of, but eh... I've gotten this far without a proofreader or editor, so hey!
7293384 If you want a proofreader / editor, I'm always open. I'm not too busy this time of the year, and I'll have time to look your stuff over.
7295777 Hrm, are you seriously offering to be my editor, or do you just want a sneak peek at the coming episodes?
7295858 A little bit of both to be honest.
But in all seriousness, I am asking to be an editor, not someone who just wants to get an early read on the chapters.
Yep. Nothing like a good kidnapping to make a pony realize their feelings for their crush. Let's do this Silver!
Well, that chapter was certainly different. I like it.
The action / adventure aspects of this chapter acts as a nice contrast to the typical slice of life stories. I also like how you are showing us more of Frosty. I feel like she is the character we have seen the least so far. All in all, good job.
Yes! Yes!
Quite possibly the best chapter yet :)
This story is really going up in views and up-votes. You're doing really well Mythic!
Yep. Ending a date with cuddles is always good.
7424543 Cuddles ARE pretty awesome.
If you want, you could add this to an all oc group to be noticed more. I just noticed this story is part of the school for new writers group.
Where do we go from here? Can't wait to find out.
Rereading after a few new chapters.
Nice to see a cast of oc ponies.
Greatly enjoying.
7763819 I'm glad to hear that you enjoy my story.
Finally I caught up. Still loving this story.
7775660 I'm glad to hear you're still enjoying it. Please, spread the word around about my story if you think others would like it. I know I enjoy writing this series, so I'm not about to stop anytime soon, but it would be nice to see more people reading it.
7775865 Here's a list of groups that could be helpful in getting people to look at your story and at the same time you'll be helping a group grow.
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/50/the-writers-group
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/244/author-support
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/151/supporting-original-characters
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/279/the-oc-fanfiction-library
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/198008/official-oc-group
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/633/first-fic-writers
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/743/new-writers-in-town
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/202383/the-group-for-all-ocs
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/198760/oc-authors
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/201098/a-writers-first-steps
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/200769/rookie-writers
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/200470/beginner-writers-group
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/202730/writers-training-grounds-entries
http://www.fimfiction.net/group/208081/group-for-first-time-writers
7775898 You could probably have sent that to me via message, but thanks anyway. Only issue I have with joining more groups and posting my story to them is that I'm not sure that anyone reads the story in the groups I'm in NOW, let alone any others I might post to.
7775962 Hmm...that's true. It is certain you'll get views, but a comment depends on the person. Everyone have a different taste in certain things and in the end it is their choice to comment or not.
7776030 My concern isn't whether or not I'd get comments, but whether or not I'd get any views. As it stands, I'm in a few groups now, and I basically ignore all the updates stating "So and so groups added these stories," and I'm sure I'm not the only one.
There's nothing like a stallion in uniform to make a mare warm inside.
Aw!
after spending a few hours reading this wonderful story I am seeing a trend that I am finding unsettling and that is a distinct lack of comments.
I am finding this story to be thought out with a good soled story line to be honest I just finished chapter 13 and the sex tag is not needed at this point.
I can say I am vary much enjoying this story and if I have time I would like to finish tomorrow as of right now defiantly worthy of a up vote but I have a rule I do not vote till I am up to date or a story has several chapters out.
you Mythic Night are doing a vary good job righting this story.
ok I am up to date on this grate story and I can say I will defiantly be keeping a eye out for up dates.
as I was going over the last 2 chapters I hade a idea that you are free to use, I sent it to you in a PM so as to keep the readers guessing if you run with it.
agene this story is really good and defiantly has some planning going on behind it.
Harts Fire
7877583 I'm glad you've enjoyed my story so far, and I hope you stick with it. I don't have too many people reading it, but I'm hoping that with time I'll gather more readers and a larger fanbase. If you know anyone who would be interested in this story, then please let them know about it.
I'm curious though, where'd you find my story? Was it from one of the groups I posted it to?
to be honest I really do not remember how I found this story.
I think I saw it after you posted a chapter as it cycled threw the up date page I tend to watch for new story's their.
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