After Discord learns about the fate set for Equestria, he can't help but do something drastic. After all, Fate and Chaos are like water and oil; they'll never get along. Let's see what happens when an extra character is introduced at the beginning!
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I am okay with this. ;)
Also reallyy curious if Max will ever molt/grow larger/shift his base form any besides eventual transformation.
I love it!
7619298 I know one princess that would like him growing larger, if you know what i mean. ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
More seriously, i liked this chapter, good world building on equestria's reconstruction, adding depth to chryssie, and the sex ed : changeling edition. XD
Damn, she was so much uneducated, that her genitals were in stasis ? That's... well irrelevant now, since a good helping of gooey love seems to have awakened her loins. But still, damn.
Aww, Crystal is learning about so many things
We need a pic with Luna and Max teaching Crystal about games. Not the "sexy time" ones but the childrens games. Also board games. D&D perhaps too?
I love this story so much!
7619352 Easiest way for a tyrant to maintain control; keep them scared, keep them separated, keep them uneducated. This ensures that they don't have the courage, unity, or knowledge to ever stand against you.
Crystal's existential breakdown was, well, heartbreaking. But she's got plenty of support to move forward
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When he does learn to shapeshift, maybe he can try for a humanoid form, as seen from that *sigh* episode, transformations can go so far as to look like inanimate objects, such as rocks.
in 1000 years time theyre going to wreck twilight's childhood with all the constant sex and inuendo assuming they both live that long
Awesome chapter. My only complaint....
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Seriously, make with the princest already!
It's only a matter of time Celestia, only a matter of Time.
7619298 He may grow a bit, but only because everyone, even the sisters, is still not quite an adult here. Luna and Celestia are about 3/4's of their canon height.
7619517 What's the point of revolting if you have no drive? The only drive they really have is survival, and that's more of a "it's easier to leave that in because they don't get too stupid" than it's actually wanted. Seriously, remove the survival instinct and people start walking into traffic and standing on train tracks. There's no drive for them to actually try to preserve their own lives.
7619554 I've never really been one to let canon stop me, You can see this for yourself on my user page. I've never watched a full episode from start to finish, only seen bits and pieces that my sister was on. I'm a 100% fandom fan.
7619686 I love sunbutt, don't get me wrong. You want Sunny love now, go read Cost of Asylum. I'm almost done with another chapter just for her. That being said, I can't just throw Celestia into the mix without a reason. There has to be some reason for her to give up her idea of finding that perfect stallion, as she's already said she wants to, and join the flock.
7619737 I understand what you're saying, and I actually agree with it from a writing standpoint.
...Still doesn't make waiting for something I'm looking forward to any less annoying though.
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7619737 That's why I sighed about that episode, while it did show us the extent of how flexible changeling transformations are, it just ruined everything else when casting Chrysalis and the rest as just plain evil.
The transformation back to human is more in the line of bringing familiarity or freedom in utility for Max, by bringing back our number one money maker, hands. With it, it'd be easier for him to bring thoughts and ideas into more tangible examples, like blueprints, models or actual artifacts.
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I though Celly was gonna find her own stallion, to spite Luna.
7620021 I haven't really decided one way or another.
7619834 Not a fan of unlimited shape-shifting. The writers seemed to have written it off as, "It's magic, it can do anything." I don't subscribe to that line of thought.
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Excellent choice!
7620212 Can't really call it unlimited if the action requires energy, probably the complexity of what they wish to transform as results in higher costs. More power for bigger things, like exactly what was the Changeling Empress expecting to do to Discord with the power thousands or millions, a spirit bomb-esque attack or just go super saiyan?
7620301 I was thinking more along the lines of Discord just screwing around and she's chasing him. He thinks it's funny, she can't keep going at that level. She starts pulling from her subjects to keep fighting even when it's not working because she's not used to anyone pushing against her. Discords ability to shrug off anything she does doesn't make her rethink her strategy, it just drives her further.
7620312 You know what I just realized, and it's funny.
Thorax's circumstance is Chrysalis' here in the story. Scared/hateful of their mom, wasn't much expected of them but to fulfill their station, thrown out from their people during an incident with little to no knowledge or experience with ponies.
And drawn to a concentrated source of love like a beacon
7620312 And a person willing to accept them and help integrate them into pony society
After prolonged exposure to it, wouldn't Max's body start adapting to store or use more love? He would be able to do things that no changeling had ever had the energy for.
7620212 I also don't like the idea of transformation with no limitations.
I do beleive you could do the rock with just a simple illusion spell. Just cast the illusion of a rock that's bigger than you and hide inside. Unless someone tries to touch the rock or dispell magic, or notice your footprints, breathing, etc...
Awwww, I'm already at the end of available chapters? It was just getting really really good!
7620301 In regards to changing, I think that, the more of a physical change in mass, the higher the energy cost. Mostly because, larger or smaller, it's still defying the law of conservation of mass...
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7619814 Also, just to clarify:
She doesn't actually need to 'give up' on her perfect stallion, she just needs to realize that Max is her perfect stallion... he just wouldn't be hers exclusively.
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Growing bigger would probably be cheaper, since you could make it hollow. Density would be all sorts of whack tho.
7624919 I suppose skimping on density would be cheaper, especially if they don't change their physiology for the transformation, and simply change outer appearances, whilst leaving their brains and digestive tract as is...
7624941 changelings don't have much of a digestive track. There's two stomachs, if you can call them that, that are used for either breaking down things eaten by the changeling into the resin or for solidifying emotions into a form that can be stored in the hive.
Only organs would be heart, which would be stressed by large sizes, and lungs. Those would also be stressed but in a different way. Magic could help ease the transformation and lower the consequential effects but big size and mass changes would be dangerous.
7625112 Another thing of note, is what happens when they change into something with significantly less mass, like type of fish you'd put in a bowl? Can they even go down that far? Canonical rules and limitations don't exist until they displayed or exposed.
So Crystal now has a higher position in the flock hierarchy with Max as bottom of the totem pole? Unless Luna meant beta female, with her as alpha female and Max as alpha male. But Luna hasn't given any real signs that Max is her equal whatsoever, she is plainly in charge of the relationship and now a complete newcomer is her second-in-command just because she's female?
7625112 In some fics I've read the changelings holes are actually evolved to allow them to be lower mass but still have the same structure and size, thus making it easier to assume smaller forms by 'filling in' the holes with the unwanted mass for the transformation in mind, also works the other way, in that expanding the holes and covering them allows for larger transformations as well.
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kiss, "you
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should be filly instead.
Healing cum, the jizz of justice!
*snort* Sorry, that just seemed funny out of all proportion to me.
Was that a fucking Spaceballs reference? If it was, I'm your forever.
At this point in time, the capital is at The Castle of the Two Sisters. (That's the abandoned castle in the Everfree where the Elements were in the pilot) The capital wasn't moved to Canterlot until after Nightmare Moon was defeated.
7905921 "the jizz of justice"
...Jizztice?
They can climb walls....
She is surprisingly sharp when she isn't hysterical.
Activation sequence initiated!
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The walls were probably smooth.
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Where is your profile pic from? It looks awesome.
horny luna