After Discord learns about the fate set for Equestria, he can't help but do something drastic. After all, Fate and Chaos are like water and oil; they'll never get along. Let's see what happens when an extra character is introduced at the beginning!
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Well I wasn't laughing until you brought up the smell of wet dog!
*sees new chapter from Reykan*
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Last I checked (6 Mar 2017, 8:35pm AEDT), this was featured - 9th out of 10 stories.
Great going, Reykan!
Hmm, i guess that means Diamond dogs are Atlantian. Thats an intresting background detail.
Dangit Reykan I wasn't laughing untill i read that
Hmm. I'm presonally not fond of Celestia joining Max's harem (no matter what you say, it's that). Though if she did, Max can be truly Raspuling.
Who can then be stabbed and shot. Then the ruling family killed and a revolution taking over the countryAlso, I hope that when you finally introduce bat-pone, they could have a male military. Due to the simple fact that losing your male population in war can be afforded (See ww1 and 2, in less than a generation the population bounced right back up), not so much for the female. Also it could lead to funny moments between the respective knights.
Summon the bat ponies!!!
8000738 Same here.
I wonder, will there be a trial for Certain Fortune? If there is a public trial, then it could look like Celestia and Luna are delibarately targeting the nobility, but also to show that clear justice is done to and for all involved.
These last two chapters have been absolutely awesome.
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As i understood Certain Fortune is now ash in the wind, could be i am wrong here.
8000810 Certain Fortune was literally vaporized in the previous chapter
8000810 Certain Fortune is dead, remember? She was vaporized last chapter.
So Diamond dogs were the Atlanteans of this world until the folly of their lack of foresight caused their home to be swallowed by the ocean. What draws my interest though is the mention of tunnel systems running under the ocean, like the Great Elro Labyrinth in the LN "Kumo Desu ga, Nani ka?" an underground dungeon that bridged two continents under an otherwise impassable ocean.
8000877 Yeah, she's dead
damnnnn
nice to see the dogs :)
wet doge.
very stinky.
wow
8000739 but he's already been stabbed and shot...
8000751 bat pone is second-best pone. Right after bug pone.
8000810 I suppose we could always set a pile of ashes on trial. I mean, it's not like someone could stop Celestia and Luna from doing that if they wanted to. They're kind of in charge with no oversight.
8001291 such disaster
Much sad
Very cry
wow
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Everyone knows batfluff is better than lovebugs.
Dogs to work the quarry! Undercastle Void to be Changeling nest! Thestrals to outscream parliament members! It is all coming together!
8001363 I know, that's why I struck it out. That little scuffle in the town actually was similar how people treated Rasputin, thinking the royal family wholly innocent and under the control of the man. (At least at first)
8001577 Yes, niches for everyone!!
disastrous
Poisons
wary
Though Max is likely weary(tired) his gaze is wary(cautious).
mares
D:
8001363 ...Meh, why not? You actually could judge someone's remains in Dragon Age: Inquisition. You could even sentence them to "community service", which basically amounted to putting their casket on display in various towns.
Diamond dogs yaaaaaaaaaaa!
8001523 Fite me. I'll bash ur gob in, swear it.
8001784 spread the ashes over the farmland, that should work. Her service is to help the plants grow.
8001596 Funny thing is I haven't actually read up on that guy. Most I know of him is a few of the words from Ra Ra Rasputin.
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You would not let batpones have milkshakes!?
You monster.
8002546 ew, bat-pone. Love-bugs are better in every way(they can BE bat-pones). All for the low cost of cuddles. Or semen, depending on the type of love-bug. Queens like the liquid love.
Binge read this piece since noon. Those 225,000 words flew by faster than I thought. So now that I am caught up I can't wait for the next chapter. Yay.
Noooo I'm all caught up....More story plz.
8002426 Rasputin was actually a sort of "holy man" with no actual connection to the church. But he managed to get into the good graces of the royal family, able to calm them, and becoming extremely influental. Near the end of his life, it was basically him running the country, as no politicians dared to go against him as if they did, they got replaced. At first the population blamed him for for the faliures of the country, but after his death since nothing changed, this hate turned to the royal family. Which ended as we all know.
The Great War made a great video, I mean Max is nowhere near as bad as Rasputin, but it's still fun to find parallels. Also, we all know the only thing that matters is the song anyways.
8003696 think I remember something about multiple assasination attempts as well.
8003696 just spent a good half an hour reading about him. The cremation thing was hilarious(the rebels took his body into the woods and burned it. Because they did it improperly, the tendons tightening due to the heat made it look like he sat up in the fire, thus fueling the rumors of his being incredibly difficult to kill). It also had a note saying one of the members of Boney M. who would dress up as Rasputin during their song actually died on the same day and in the same city as Rasputin!
8003982 Actually there are many, many, many misconceptions about how he died, and the most likely was him simply being shot and his body thrown in a river. He was only targeted once by assassins I think. That guy became rather famous for all the wrong reason.
Anyhow, since Max is the one sort of keeping the princesses together, a smart enemy might realise that he should be the main target. And it would be more easier to sic the peasants on a weird creature than the princesses...*Nudge, nudge*
8004031 Oh, you mean like Fortune did?
8004208 A bit more shadily and with more skill. But yes. To be fair however, she just acted on anger and not on any higher reasoning. At least it feels like that to me.
The Great Bath?
Sounds like a version of the Biblical Great Flood
In chapter 5, you had the following:
With this chapter, you might want to do a small retcon?
And the best part is that I can actually see that name appearing in the original!
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Or the greek tale of the loss of Atlantis...
Yayyyyyyyyyy!!!!
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On the one hand, I can totally see where you're coming from. Mere "glimpses" are not going to demonstrate the full extent of our technological might.
On the other hand though, we only have access to things like electricity and magnetism. How much greater can they climb when Equestrian magic is used as well? Without the perspective of a culture like ours it would be a hobble to creativity, but WITH it...
Damn it, I wasn't laughing at the Great Bath, until the 'wet dog' comment made me snort.
EXTERMINATE
DELETE
That's a little familiar to what happened with the noble last chapter.
He doesn’t need to, Max. You’re doing all that for him. All he has to do is sit back and enjoy the show!