After Discord learns about the fate set for Equestria, he can't help but do something drastic. After all, Fate and Chaos are like water and oil; they'll never get along. Let's see what happens when an extra character is introduced at the beginning!
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Oh god!
What have you let loose?
*referring to the internet*
7929212 He let loose the sex machine!
I once begged to see that video cause I got curious. My uncle threatened to punch Me or my cousin in the jaw if we looked away.
I regret not taking the punch.
7929212 The internet is a good thing.
Hopefully that pool party fiasco didn't result in any military rule issues, or penalties or anything.
*shivers in fear*
7929265 only thing missing now is:
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Oh god, is the video the dreaded 2g1c?
I watched the start of that video. The moment the cup came into play I noped the balls out.
Access to porn and she's cracked open the hentai safe, soon she's gonna ask Max to shapeshift into a tentacle monster
Yay u kewll
Flagstone roads should be what you go with- gravel roads are bad for horses, their hooves can't handle it, generally speaking. In fact, the idea of a pony suggesting gravel roads is a little bizarre if you ask me.
Tell me that Max didn't spend all his time on the internet searching porn, i sometimes check science videos when i'm not reading.
7929285 I never finished it. I eventually got around to trying to watch it, but it never caught my attention. It's just one of those things people would dare others to watch while drunk.
7929360 It didn't, in fact we spent some time teaching the guy how to swim afterwards. I especially got on him about hanging around the deep end of the pool during a pool party where people are rough-housing like we were when you don't know how to swim.
Of course, this was a few years ago, before we had all of this special snowflake bullshit. People talk about everyone being equal but that's not what they want. We'll only have that occur when government forms, job applications and school applications don't ask for your race.
7929927 I don't think anyone spends all their time on the internet searching up porn, but right now Crystal has learned how to access his memories of such and she is very interested in it. It's like getting a new car and wanting to drive it around. She's curious what else she now has access to and sex is high on her priority list. There's other things of course, but the other things aren't important to her.
7929873 the basic stuff should be proper dirt paths. Not just where ponies go, but clear stretches of densely compacted earth. Those things last quite a while, and if properly done - with gutters and somewhat elevated above ground level, not to mention dense enough - they can be still travel worthy even in rainy periods.
Not to mention that if earth ponies have any kind of earth manipulation magic it would be even cheaper to main them.
A network of those connecting the current settlements of equestria would allow for greater communication and commerce, that would in turn increase unity by dint of the ponies actually identifying themselves as a people. Probably.
Roads are important in the end
OK, on the story now. Just binge read it for a catchy description and for being from someone I follow.
Holy I don't regret it for a moment.
I love this story. It's not mindless clop, for starters. It presents an approach to changelings I can't say I've seen before. And it makes sense
It also presents us with a nascent kingdom, with its struggles and hardships, a world that has just do like escaped an age of chaos. We can see two mares that are barely into adulthood having to deal with the burden of being the pillar of the world, and to bring a future for their ponies.
And not least, a chaos spirit that is discovering still what is TRUE change. Not evil nor good, just a true incarnation of that what moves the universe
Basically, this has a brilliant potential. She it delivers. Hell, the sex scenes actually have a place in the plot! Such interactions in such a budding relationship are a immense outlet for their emotions and feelings. They are not there just for the sake of it, they show true tenderness and passion
Probably there are things I forgot about. No matter, have a fave and a like. Hope they incentive you to write more of this jewel
7931035 Glad you like it. Always nice to see a legit review and reasons why someone finds it an entertaining read.
7930998 Yeah, I don't get racism at all.
It'd make more sense if our body colours granted us special abilities, because then that'd be like unicorn/pegasus/earth pony differences or X-Men mutations (both of which have a history of race-based tension), but IRL we're all exactly the same inside.
Heck, even a white dude will turn brown if he spends too much time in the sun. Granted, not as brown, but still darkened skin.
I just hope racism dies out by the year 3000 - or, if we're lucky, 2500.
7931035
Sure, but I believe they're talking about roads within the city right now. If nothing else, flagstone roads within the city are good for morale, just like an outer wall. And that's ignoring the obvious infrastructure benefits a network of roads provides.
7930998 Had a similar situation myself except it was me that got chucked in the pool, managed to grab the edge of the pool and launch up and snag the prankster and drag him in aswell, turns out he couldn't swim either.
Definitely interested in where you end up taking this clop fic that isn't just about the clop. Keep up the good work.
7931816 I like doing that. Taking clop stories and doing more with them, that is. Not attempting to drown people who can't swim. I did the same with Cost of Asylum(have like, 3 chapters in progress on that one, including a birthday party for Celestia that was before the prank on Luna) and it's always fun to pull that off. My goal is to get Twilight and Star together in the next chapter in the story, but then I went and made another sad chapter. I swear, sometimes I end up kicking myself in the balls while writing. No regrets though
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Still gonna bug you about shapeshifter not being two words, and the Internet being a proper noun.
When I was in the USMC, part of basic training was learning how to swim. Of course, Marines you figure you're going to be around water.
But that sort of thing is why I detest practical jokes.
One if you are going toss someone into the water be sure they can swim before you get them wet. And two why would the person who acts the hero and kept someone from drowning be called the a murder?
Thinks back to the beginning of the dark ages