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His tongue. He's using it right.
And once more, you have me hooked on another of your stories. We have got to stop meeting like this.
7031620 I'm fine with these type of meetings, its like falling in love at first sight
7031666 Reykan must never know of my love...or the hidden cameras...by the way Rey, your DVD Player stutters/shakes a bit and it's fucking with my camera. Fix that for me, yeah?
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7031666 jokes on Sober, I don't have a DVD player. Don't know who he's stalking, but it isn't me.
So, would you be mad if I beg for new chapters again
will read later due to LoL ref i had my hopes up fer until i read the description.
7032118 No, I didn't mean to reference him, sorry to get your hopes up.
7032174 Twisted? I prefer my fate tempered. :P
New story from reykan + drunk levels rising = I'm about to have a good time.
>sex
>gore
...
>Pyro?
Not sure if want.
Good start. Will follow. Have a like.
7032174 quick question: how big is max? Is he a normal sized or a queen sized changeling? There isn't that much detail as to how he looks, next to the basics.
I really need to stop reading these while I'm on the clock, having awkward boners at work isn't very professional, but hay my break is in 8 minutes
7032747 Max very specifically states that he's taller than the other ponies. Safe to assume he's at least Alicorn height.
Oh, I'll be closely following THIS...
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it ain't a bad thing, i have seen some LoL fics on the site before.
Will still look at this later.
Wow like immediately hoked!
You brilliant bastard!
Too far
There was another with the same typo, but it's a nightmare to find it on a phone.
Did that raging customer had the name of Ted? :D
And Discord has his own version of that annoying paperclip? Seriously :D
Swing what? Swing who?
In this sentence it's You're
Since you use plural it's There are. At least I hope I'm not wrong on this
Mmmmm butts... I had some other reaction, but I forgot it. Meh.
Much.
This is a bit weird. It's like he would need to provide the love he asked for.
Discord pulled a Thinking Man when he got stoned :) an enlightened Discord is a scary Discord.
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Very awsome story. I got excitied thinking that changlings will now always be royal advisors for their multi tasking and emotion sensing. Mlp will never be the same.
I like how you are building worlds in your storys through perspective of your characters. This story has more potential for interesting world-building process rather than any other of your storys. "Substitute" story is coming to an end and i think it could be awesome if you will concentrate your efforts on this one.
I can see a lot of interesting events coming in here. I think Max is a changeling king creature, like Cimmerian in his hexed form. Soon Max will start to build his personal hive by following his new instincts and hoard emotions. Big amount of hoarded emotions should bait in changelings from nearby lands, if to follow your logic in regard of "sense range" of a changeling, relatively big pool of stored emotions can be sensed by a changeling from far away. Not only simple changelings should come in, but Queens to. Newcoming changelings should make one big political problem for royalty, problem of control and administration. This situation may allow Max to grow up from role of
vaginal bugconcubine into role of consort/baron/duke. Oh, and he can change his body to match lunar style.Dat last line
I have a mild feeling that Celestia will go mad instead Luna in this timeline.
Ooooh how I wait for the momentGood god, this is awesome.
7035148 I've never been able to write a 'clop for the sake of clop' story. I need a reason, why are these characters pursuing a relationship? Why should she accept his advances, why does he choose her out of all the hundreds of others out there? What happens as a result? Where is Carmen Sandiego in all of this?
7032581 I haven't changed my profile pic in a while. I may pull up my Trinity from Warframe as a pic for a bit. I'm thinking of changing it.
7032747 I had Luna comment on not seeing one 'of this size before' and hoped that was enough, but I'll be having Max give himself a better once over once he knows he's not dying. He's got other things on his mind than 'I'm in magic pony land' right now.
7032919 I try not to read anything questionable on the clock. If anything, I hit them during bathroom breaks >->
7034169 I like to think that Discord could be very intelligent if he had a reason to be. He just usually doesn't have one.
7035313 Like Substitute, I have nothing written down for this story. Anything could happen. For instance, I was planning on having Cim meet the Mino chieftain in the next chapter and they(the minotaurs) be all cool and nice. I decided against that at work. Thus, I have changed a major plot point on a whim.
7035354 You don't? Ooooh, so if we gently whisper ideas in the comments there is a chance you change the future story if it's a really good idea? (*Ahem* Max shapeshifting into other ponies and standing inside a mirrorframe *Ahem*) And do you have some sort of inkling on how do you want to end it, or just however it turns out as well?
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>Maybe it's the new body talking, but when she was walking away earlier, hell even when her sister was walking away, those butts.
I love it when creatures have multiple butts. It just makes everything so much more awkward.
Well this is... certainly something. Not what I expected, but then again it's not like anything can go bad with Reykan at the wheel. Looking forward to where this goes.
I tried to picture Discord with a chaotic boner... Somethings can't be unseen 0-0
Keep it up and this will end up in my top ten also,
however, the
You also need to space a couple of your paragraphs apart.
Expect an answer,
I would
Situation was reversed?
As much as
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God DAMN IT REYKAN... more please...
7036628 MMMMM butts.
Fausticorn is pissed!!!
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Asking the real question!
Now you have obligated yourself to hide Carmen Sandiego in the settings of each of your stories!
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I'm intrigued
"That, and changelings are going to be dragged out into the open a lot earlier in this timeline"
Stories where a Human is turned into a Changeling and dropped into Equestria and have to survive being found out are plentiful but I've yet to read one where a Human in the past goes "Sup. We're Changelings. So...yeah that's a thing now."
Unrelated but I've always wondered if there's a story with a second kind of Alicorn, bases around
Changeling-Thestral-Crystal ponies.
[edit] Changeling-Thestral-Crystal tried to auto correct to Microelectromechanical??
7047122 That sounds a bit to close to sparkly vampire territory.
Every time your stories update I get this big-ass grin. Keep'em coming and I'll keep from coming on you. :3
No one likes being told they're doing something stupidly... I just know this is going to ball out of control once the nobles get involved. We can't depend on Blueblood, but I'm sure he has an ancester who's just as pigheaded as he is...
7050821 Oh it will. Max hasn't been around long enough to piss in anybody's oats yet, but I know it's going to happen. He's probably also going to be wanted by several ponies for 'sullying a goddess' among other things.
While all of the references I checked said that "yon" and "yonder" are more or less interchangeable, it's been my experience that it feels more natural to stick to "yon" when you need an adjective. (ie. treat "yon" as the "my" to yonder's "mine")
Sister's.
Fricken first sentence dude :D.
Lemme read the story and then I'll go typo-hunting.again
Wasn't Lulu wearing some blackish stuff? (And purple-blueish booties?)
Unnecessary "a"
Isn't it "thine"? This is a geniue question.
You are definetly improving. I'm reading Substitute again, and the difference in the number of mistakes is quite visible. Also, in the first half of Asylum (didn't read the rest, I just didn't find it interesting)
Don't know who said it was moving to fast, but I say its not in any way. The reasons you stated were the very reason why its moving at this speed.
nice story so far, lets hope it doesn't like adapt and overcome 2, damn I really liked how that one started