After Discord learns about the fate set for Equestria, he can't help but do something drastic. After all, Fate and Chaos are like water and oil; they'll never get along. Let's see what happens when an extra character is introduced at the beginning!
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Crystal isn't too far removed from Chryssalis.
That is also the name of an OC of an author on this site :D Crystal Wishes.
7545199 Heh...I suddenly think the former might not be an accident...the later more of an accident...but not the former....
GODS I SOUND LIKE THE MAJOR FROM HELSING!!!
Wow, new character appeared on the story and a hot clop scene. It was also nice to learn about Changeling culture from an actual changeling. Keep up the great job.
Fate has changed once more
Hello, field commander Chrysalis
7545213 Abridged or Canon?
Either way, yeah that is about similar to what I think.
Or it could just be that not all mares/women/whatever the preferred term for female changelings is release torrents of fluid every time they cum.
I have to keep reminding myself that Luna and Celestia are really, really young in this. I keep expecting them to have at least adult-level knowledge in everything and it always manages to jar me a bit every time they don't. It probably wouldn't be so bad if I was reading the whole thing at once instead of in pieces.
Once Crystal gets on her hooves, she starts writing and becomes an author of romance stories
That clop scene came out more cute than hot.
Ummm... Luna? Max just said his people were monogamous, but not only are you inviting another into the group without his knowledge, opinion or consent, you just had sex with her, both of which happened within an hour of first meeting her. True ponies are polygamous but he's literally been gone not even a day and she's shacking up with and (sorta?) proposing to random strangers already.
This is so going to be a problem when he gets back.
My first reaction: That's Chrissy while young isn't she?
Second reaction: Holy crap Luna IS fast. She saw a changeling raiding her stash, getting drunk, less than an hour later she is adding her to her flock. You are only missing an Elvis imitator.
Final reaction: Max will be mildly pissed. Y'now, monogamous heritage, and you just did it with someone else. A random stranger no less...
Ok. So, Luna finds a changeling and immediately takes it to bed. Seems legit.
I thought they'd never seen or heard of changelings before Max? Yet in this chapter it suggests otherwise.
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7545996 he did say he'd be open to following her traditions, plus she's the princess and on earth at the same time it wasnt uncommon for kings to have multiple wives, it was more or less expected actually
also max shapeshifting inbound because hes got a teacher now
Why do I feel like crystal wish is going to turn into a hold the door kind of name
Crystal wish... crystalwish... crysalwis... chrysalis! It's chrysalis!
7568450 Holy shit.
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But he's is also male, and let's be honest, what dude hasn't fantasized at least once about doing it with two chicks?
Bwahahahahaha! Ah aint dumb, an this is just plum thckin awesomeeee!
Crystal Wish = Chrysalis
Hah
Soooooo...this is rape?
7885046 Um...yes. Sure, Crystal doesn't resist too much, but she was intoxicated (on lust) and Luna kissed her, further enveloping her with lust.
The timeline is just getting smashed and dashed evermore, huh?
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Correct, but Max told them what he knew of his new species so Luna would likely recognize one by appearance and circumstance. Still, the town part was a little out of place indeed...
Fascinating to see the flock expand! Heh. How will Max react to his luck?
es Chryssalis tiene que serlo. esto tiene una historia interesante
es Chryssalis tiene que serlo. esto tiene una historia interesante
Unexpected, and interesting.
Another settlement needs your help!
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I’ll mark it on your map
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Damn it Preston!