Cute ending, I can definitely see Fluttershy taking full advantage of a quiet spot out in the woods to guarantee some alone time.

6982030 Oh, bugger! I thought I caught all the little bastards but apparantly there's always more. Most of them fixed, thank you! And glad you enjoy it. My work is done.
6983792 Thank ya kindly!

6944182 I dunno... but it sounds like something relates to the snark.

7820681 No, she's scoring how mane spankings she Will give her. Five for a hideous choice, and up to one for a good choice. She is a dom after all.
7820643 Thanks. I'm not good at being subtle, so I just hoped it worked anyway.
7820663 My best ideas (not the best written, but best ideas) are the ones that comes on the spot. This was one of them.

7903672 No no, it’s white. Like when Pat Boone did a cover of "Tutti Frutti"?

Nah, just kidding. I will change it.

7903727 Spank you! I tried my best, glad you liked it! :) I will correct my errors as soon as I find my Ipad.

Okay,I was wrong, last one

It taste like you..."

tastes

Also hot damn, I need to find me some of that candy

7903735 Me too... me too.

7903729 Ooooohhhhh. Sounds legit

7903733 Coolies, sorry if I just kept commenting with corrections for most of the story.

Two thumbs up though, super sweet story! Also question, I've heard cooch, but where the fizuck did "snorcher" come from? XD

7907583 Oh, that's completely fine! Since I never get all those errors myself I'm only grateful.

Thanks!

"Coochie Snorcher", well if you look through the comments you will find a long and elaborate explanation, but the short one is that it comes from the Vagina Monologues by Eve Ensler.

7907827 Ah okay. Thank you for the abridged explanation!

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Oh, alright, just to clarify, but still made me laugh, for some reason!

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I know it isn't, and I'm willing to keep riding on this story until the end!

And there we have it, the ending of this amazing story! I don't even have words to describe how good this story was, how pleasurable was to read each and single part of this, even being short, but being a great passtime for some good weeks.

Also, I want to congratulate you for writing this! A amazing job, just to say. Hope to read more from you, Frank.
~Igor

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Well, thank you! Nothing makes an author so happy as high praise and I am no exception. Your lengthy comments have been a treat for me in more way than one; I must thank you for pointing out mistakes giving me the opportunity not only to correct those but giving the old girl a few other adjustments long overdue. So thank you again!

I'm not sure what to recommend for you... perhaps "adventures of a domestic mare?"
Thanks for reading and welcome back!

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Thanks for the consideration, man! I am happy that I made you happy. And I'm sure that I won't just read one or two more stories of you, I will read all of them and all that are coming sooner!