Applejack is an honest mare, she has lived most of her life at Sweet Apple Acres, she's the Element of Honesty and is friend to many of the ponies at the small town of Ponyville.
But Applejack has kept a secret from her friends, her brother and Granny Smith know it well, but they will not speak of it, to Applejack, this secret means more to her than being the Element of Honesty.
But now, some time after the Changeling invasion, the secret is revealed, and everything changes, but is it for the better?
Chapters (11)
Hmm. . . Why do I have the feeling that Sarah might be a pegasus?
I'm very much curious why Sarah's Leather Jacket would earn her the townsfolk's ire. For those who are not familier with the word "ire" it means anger
6772656 The jacket is made of leather, and I'm going with the whole, 'most ponies hate leather because it comes from cows or whatever, and they consider it murder.
I don't know if that answers your question.
6772525 *in overly sarcastic voice*
I have no idea what you are talking about........
6772855 yes it does indeed answer my question. Thank you
P.s. I apologize if I have offended you in any way. I promise if I have, it was not intentional.
6772855 Forgot to mention I do indeed enjoy the story thus far and I am looking forward to more chapters whenever you deem possible. :)
Oh I love how this is going! Please do more!
6772887 I'm glad you enjoy it, it means a lot to me.
I don't see how the question would offend me....if you have criticism for me, go ahead and say it.
As for chapters......I don't exactly have a stable time of day for writing, but I have hopes for this......been planning it for about a month.
6773154 I'll do what I can.
How is this story a dark fic? Going by the synopsis, it doesn't sound that dark...
6783429 Wait for the later chapters, I'm not that good with dark fics but either I put in dark chapters, or I remove it entirely.
This story is very good you should keep on making good story's like this .
7991489 I'm trying, it's hard to get the drive for this stuff lately.
But I'll do what I can.
All I could think of during Sarah’s dreams was, where is Luna? Sarah needs some serious help and I feel that she hasn't been getting it.
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I felt that this was a personal problem, and something that Sarah needed to handle on her own.
Besides, I didn't think that Luna would fit in right here anyway.
Ouch with memory gone Sarah is going to be in for a rough time.
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https://youtu.be/hw_WyaiWhxw
I agree.
The premise got my attention but the name jsut killed it for me.
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Hmm, yea, I can see the issue with the name, time for a quick change!
Edit: Done!
Applejack you need to talk to Twilight now! Your sister has admitted to taking a job to kill someone! I know magic exists here but you may not know everything you need to know about what you sister is going through. I just feel that this will end very badly for your sister and that there is some seriously unusual stuff going down in your life.
This feels like something out of Silent Hill.
So, a pony with two magical cores makes them become an assassin? That’s effed up. Sarah’s just gonna hafta deal with it her whole life.
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I know next to nothing about Silent Hill, except that it's some form of horror.
But I'll take your word for it.
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I uh, fail....to see how Twilight could help in this situation, I mean, yea, magic, but uh.......I'm not sure where I was going with that.
But yea, your right, some unusual stuff be happening, but I don't really feel like giving out any spoilers about the ending, so.......patience?
Oh who am I kidding? There's bound to be someone out there who will want me to explain the entire plot, and then reveal the end.....ah well, as long as I have fun writing, I 'should' be fine.
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Uh, I just want to clarify, Sarah is the one with two magical cores, but uh, yea, what happened to her WAS messed up.
I’m sure that Sarah’s an assassin, but would she be willing to kill a child?
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Wow, that's dark, but uh, depends on whether or not she has a psychotic break, she would LIKE to avoid that, but it is not outside the realm of possibility.
Why. Why is every paragraph an entire run on sentence? Use periods inside the pragraph, man.
Im... i cant read this, im sorry. Gonna give you a thimbs up for the idea and direction it’s going, though.
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Sorry about the bad writing stuff, I'm not a master by any means.
But thanks for reading this, it means a lot.
I wonder just how bad it has been for Sarah with all these different personalities in her head? Hopefully they can find a way to either merge several of them together or find a way to remove safely the more negative ones.
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To be honest, I hadn't considered merging any of them, BUT, I may do it now that you mention it, depends on how I feel the story should go.
Well I see that poor Sarah is not going to get any rest. Now the question becomes what will Celestia do about all of this?
This was kinda a bittersweet ending. Hopefully Sarah can team up with the other Elements that she belongs to and they can do some good. Also I get the feeling that Applejack is going to be rightfully pissed when she finds out Celestia approved the group behind her family's issues.
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In impish voice* You mean IF she finds out!
Sorry, I had to do it.
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Just to finish the joke.