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BloodBunny67


Just trying to become a better writer. Plus, PONIES! :twilightsmile:

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After discovering some old scrolls while doing research for a school project, Apple Bloom has some hard questions that need answering. Questions that Big Mac has spent his entire life trying to forget.






***Third story in the 'Ask' one-shot series. These are stand alone stories and can be read in any order. For the others, follow these links:
Ask Snowflake
Ask Diamond Tiara

*** Props to Superfortress78 Who made a really neat Equestrian Calendar resource, which I used in a slightly modified form for the dates in this story.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 15 )

Intriguing, please continue. I always find different authors takes on the history of the Apple Parent's fate interesting, not to mention McIntosh's take on things as the eldest of the siblings. NYC, that's a new twist though. The siblings came back to the farm after the accident.

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Hey, thanks for the kind words :pinkiesmile:

Chapter 2 is all planned out and writing has started, should be on its way soon!

Very good. Please continue.

Hmm, color me intrigued... :) Still, is this another one of those "Big Mac and AJ are AppleBloom's parents" sorta deal?

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That's the plan :twilightsmile:

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Eeyup! :eeyup:


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Lol thanks! I assure you there is no incest in this story and applejack does not appear other than by mention. I won't say more than that until chapter 2 drops! :ajsmug:

6738241 You're most welcome.

Hooooh my gosh~~~ :rainbowkiss:

hi big mac! um do you date pinkie or raity that's my question :ajbemused: from your fan Kimberly! byue

Wow...

Also, I face-hoofed at "Neigh York City". It's as bad a pun as Manehattan. I applaud you for it though.

So Big Mac has a big secret now does he? I think I have an idea but I will wait until it comes out before I pass judgment.

Oooooo~
More please, this is turning out to be quite interesting!

Big Mac you naughty boy! So What convinced him to return home I wonder?

Oh...ohhhhhh.....

Neat story. The emotions and the characterization feel realistic, but I think one little detail might have spoiled my anticipation. Meteoric Rise's orange eyes pretty much give away that she's Applebloom's mother, and judging by the romantic start here, that Big Mac is her father. It doesn't necessarily ruin the story, but it does lessen the mystery a bit. Ah well, it was hinted at in the first chapter when the poor filly found out her real birthday.

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