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Terrasora


If I ever get good at Rocket League, I'll change my name to Terra Score-a.

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Apple Bloom needs help with an assignment. Writers are supposed to have a 'voice' that is uniquely there', that sets them apart from each other. Of course, Apple Bloom won't have that voice at such a young age but how about somepony else? Someone older and wiser who already speaks in a voice that is distinctly his?

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I thought it was pretty good, but I think a good sister scene to add is when AJ snaps at Applebloom for doing homework at the table she could have had a retort like;

"Alright, ah just won't do it then!"

or

"Would ya rather have me fail?"

As as sort of 'sibling rivalry' moment to help with the story's 'Slice of Life' feel. :ajsmug:

I liked this story a lot. It captured what I imagine Big Mac's personality to be.

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I sincerely doubt that would be the case, since AJ is closer to a mother to AB then a sister

"But Applejack Ah need ta ask someone ta do it, it ain't like Ah got the paper n' pencil right here." :applecry:
"Don't use yer fancy logic to muddy the issue." :ajbemused:
"Why is everything fancy with you?" :applecry:
Big Mac needs an episode this next season, I swear. I like this story.

I love stories that add a bit more to Big Mac's character. This was no exception. Good job! Faved. :twilightsmile:

Some good earthy lessons there that everyone should know.

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