Life is 10% what happens to you and 90% how you react to it. ~ Charles R. Swindoll
Derpy falls asleep one night, and has proper grammar, but when she wakes up she says, "Me is tired," wait, what? IMPROPER GRAMMAR?
She goes to Twilight for help, she wonders why everypony is staring a her, she tells Twilight, "Why everypony staring eyes?"
Twilight decides to send Derpy to school.
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Lolwut.
Mother of God.....
I don't even know. Is Derpy a kid here? She's not that stupid! No offense, but really?! If you had blamed that on her depth perception, it would've been fine. But this just makes her seem like one of those people in the mental hospitals who are to brain-damaged to do anything but act like 6-year olds.
At first I thought it was going to be like many recent movie trailers, and have all the story's jokes mentioned in the synopsis. But instead we have a first chapter that doesn't really go anywhere. Quite liked the description of "My Little Human"
I don't know about Derpy, but I think the author could do with some grammar revision. Is that intentional? (And what's a "droor"?)
6749812 I didn't know how to spell drawer, I'll go change that.
that exlains lyra's obsession with humans. she's an equestrian brony!!!!!
I'm laughing at how bad my writing used to be. Doctor Hooves tucked Twilight into bed.