Discord Writes a Fanfic

Discord writes a story about Sir Discord, who shows true heroism as he fends off the attacks from Rainbow-the-temptress while he protects Lady Fluttershy and sees to her every need, Unlike a certain temptress who can't keep her hooves to herself! Oh and the others are there too, having a picnic or something.

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Spookyrus

Spookyrus #1 · Dec 5th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Ah, it was good for a quick read. I take it this would have to be in between Keep Calm and Flutter On and Twilight's Kingdom, considering Discord's relationship with the Mane Six. The errors in the second half were a bit distracting, but if you do get it edited, I recommend leaving the first half untouched, because the errors there make it more humorous. Also, I recommend adding Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash to the tags, since they were featured more heavily than the other mains.

Hungryman

Hungryman #2 · Dec 5th, 2015 · · ·

Heh. That was quiet funny, a good insight on how Discord sees ponies around him. Correct some errors in the second part of the story and it will be just perfect.

Starblazer14

Starblazer14 #3 · Dec 5th, 2015 · · ·

That was a good story, but, unless it's just you feel Discord pronounces things, there are just a few grammer issues, like mpuppy4 said. But anyways, still a great story!