Can You Fill The Void

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Set shortly after the Nightmare Rarity arc in the comics.
Nightmare moon believes Twilight is responsible for both of her defeats and has decided to take care of the root of the problem. With the last of her strength she enters Twilight's dreams to claim her revenge.

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Evilpresident

Evilpresident #1 · Nov 22nd, 2015 · 2 · ·

So, Twilight is an Eldritch abomination? Or the Equestrian equivelant perhaps.

DR-Fluffy

DR-Fluffy #2 · Nov 22nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

6658775 I would say more of a black hole in which no emotion can escape, or in Nightmare Moon's care magical beings. Not counting Twilight's ability to use magic of course.

Lunae Lumen

Lunae Lumen #3 · Nov 22nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

only clamming her when she was a broken wrack

for a moment my mouth left a jar

...funny though it is to visualize lines like these, this needs some editing.

Ebonysdagger

Ebonysdagger #4 · Nov 22nd, 2015 · · ·

This is more or less what I would expect to happen if Nightmare tried to possess Twilight. Maybe not the reasons for it but definitely the end result.

JFalk

JFalk #5 · Nov 22nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

This Twilight is more an emotional Philosophical Zombie than anything else...

DR-Fluffy

DR-Fluffy #6 · Nov 22nd, 2015 · 1 · ·

6659014 this is the first i have ever heard of a Philosophical Zombie but it fits pretty well.

Monarch Pony

Monarch Pony #7 · Nov 25th, 2015 · 2 · ·

GGGBOF! (Goodness Gracious Great Balls of Fire!)

I knew Twilight was odd, but this was something!

videocrazy

videocrazy #8 · Jan 27th, 2016 · · ·

This is an interesting story, and I really like the twist. It's just a shame that the story seriously needs an editor to give it a good once-over. This story is rife with grammatical errors. Oddly enough, there's only a handful of spelling errors, though. Usually the former comes with plenty of the latter.

DR-Fluffy

DR-Fluffy #9 · Jan 27th, 2016 · · ·

6877737 The spelling errors I can normally catch, but It's the grammatical errors I have trouble with. But I'm getting better, you should have seen the story when it was first uploaded. Anyway, I'm glad you like the story.

Greatazuredragon