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Sunny Flare


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Thanks for the feedback

Rarity was going to appear in the story, but it didn't quite work out like I wanted so I just let it be there. Along with the whole underwear ordeal.

6694825 I'd like to see a sequel to this.

Good story overall,
try to make sure you remember which pronouns you're using for a character unless it is intentional, I'm sure I caught a "he" there instead of a "she" when you were talking about Powered Up Twilight.

SO. Need an editor for this.

However I enjoyed profusely.

Yep.

Enjoyed.

The tape gag was a lie.

Quite a torture there...

Did you even think this asking the artis of equestria untamed to make this story a comic.

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