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Thanks for the feedback
Rarity was going to appear in the story, but it didn't quite work out like I wanted so I just let it be there. Along with the whole underwear ordeal.
6694825 I'd like to see a sequel to this.
Good story overall,
try to make sure you remember which pronouns you're using for a character unless it is intentional, I'm sure I caught a "he" there instead of a "she" when you were talking about Powered Up Twilight.
SO. Need an editor for this.
However I enjoyed profusely.
Yep.
Enjoyed.
The tape gag was a lie.
Quite a torture there...
Did you even think this asking the artis of equestria untamed to make this story a comic.