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The home of the Shadowbolts Adventures and various other stories, mostly related to Equestria Girls.

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You just go on and rate your fics however you want to rate them. I'm just happy the Shadowbolt Ladies are back in action. I honestly prefer the antics of your Sugarcoat and Sour Sweet to Sunset & Twilight.

"Being a responsible adult sucks."

Preach it, girl, :moustache:

This is going to be fun. Instant following Because I damn feel like it! :twilightsmile:

Why are they so worried about sleeping with Sour Sweet? Did something happen in a previous installment that I don't remember?

6784454 Pretty sure they just don't want to deal with her personality.

Am I the only pony who thinks Twilight in this episode is cute? She's like the Fluttershy out of the group.

You reading this I imagined it'd be Equestria Girls meets The Hangover. Though seems to not be the case.

Rather there is a lot of tension here, though more than just the aggressive kind.

6784454 I was wondering the same thing. I don't think anything else happened, but maybe something happened that wasn't in the story? After all, it IS Sour Sweet, I could only imagine what might've happened....

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Probably just the fact there's a non-zero probability she'll wake up in a bad mood and murder her partner in their sleep.

Man, Sugercoat's lines are just pure gold here!

Sour Sweet though... man, I'm really feeling for her, poor girl. There is clearly an underlying issue here that is really bothering her, and they just went and made it worse. Indigo and Lemon were especially unmindful- they literally just heard her confession of feelings of unwantedness mere hours prior! If it wasn't for the fact that Sunny was looking after Twilight, I'm betting she would have roomed with her.

I can only imagine that things will go deeper from here. And knowing Sour Sweet, it could very well end in an explosion.

That would be a dream come true for me seeing indigo, lemon, and sugarcoat sharing a bed, but I do feel bad for sour

Poor Sour Sweet... I bet Sunny would've gone with her if she hadn't promised Twilight first.... Heck, if I could jump into the story, I would've shared a room with her!!!!

Nice job so far! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh, and edit... This is on the front page of FiM Fic!!! Nice job!!!

Sugarcoat flirting?
...
My respect for the lady has heightened tenfold.

"We passed a service station not too far back. I'll just take a walk, get enough gas to get us to the next station, and we'll be on our way.

If she was smart, she'd get that gas, put it in the car, double back to the station she just walked to, and fill up there since they know there's a station there to fill up at. Too many people make this mistake.

You girls chill, listen to some tunes, and

run the battery down so we'll have an even bigger problem later!

Lemon smiled. "Is that all? Well that's okay! There are ways to tell! Do you ever think about girls when you're-"

"Let's not go there, please!" Indigo Zap raised her hands in protest. "I don't need to hear about my friends' masturbation habits."

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"So what do you want to do first when we get to Las Pegasus?"

"Right now? Get a shower. Ewe..." Twilight looked down at herself.

So why was she sitting on/holding a tiny sheep? :rainbowhuh:

How they can convince you that something physiologically impossible is actually happening even when you know it's not possible."

I think you mean physically impossible, unless the magician is pulling live birds out of his ass...

Sour Sweet's cluster F-bomb cracked me up because I can totally hear her going off like that. :rainbowlaugh:

"I'm just glad we don't have to walk all the way back with this thing. Even just a few gallons is pretty heavy." Indigo explained as she and Lemon dumped what they had purchased into the tank from their canister.

:facehoof: What the...

Girl, just...

...no!

You can fill the tank from the pump! You don't need to empty your backup can into the tank! You NEED that backup can of gas just in case!

Oy. :facehoof:

I mean, I know they're teenagers, but...oy.

Poor Sour. :fluttershysad:

Great start, can't wait to see what crazy things happen to these ripe, innocent virgins strong, independent young women in the next installment! :pinkiecrazy:

"I won't make you do anything you don't want to." -- that is such a cliche phrase! Nobody ever talks like that, except maybe an actual rapist.

Sour Sweet still wins everything.

I'd hate to be near Sour Sweet when she's on her period.

You are too good at Sugarcoat and Sour Sweet. Just... Wow.

"I'll stay with Sunny." Twilight was instantly clinging to Sunny's arm.

Sunny just gave her a comforting smile. "That sounds fine to me."

Alright, we got ourselves a new ship here, and we shall call it SunLight. Wait...no we already have that. Uh.....SunnyLight? No sounds similar Um.....SunnySparkle? Nah...um......I got nothing. :P

Obligatory musical reference GO!

I know you are refering to the story where Sour tries to seduce Braeburn.
I would point the "gentle girl" Little Strongheart was carrying a tomahawk on his bag, and tried to attack Sour who was unarmed .

Well I feel sorry for Sour Sweet now, but I can't help but think her first with Lemon, although entirely understandable will end up to be a very stupid idea with bad consequences for both of them. The wine probably didn't help the decision process.

I can see this headcanon of Sour Sweets. Nice work here, can't wait for me. :twilightsmile:

You had me worried for a sec... But damn. Poor Vinyl, betrayed by the one she loves one shudders to think of how she'll react when she finds out, as for Sour Sweet the poor girl mental health is not an easy thing to deal with, outcast and lonely, but I'm confident she'll find someone who loves her for her quirks and all. Lemon Zest, huge mistake, god only knows what is going on in her head guilt, shame, a flatline. All in all good chapters although Lemon went a bit call of the wild in the last bit nothing to bad, i have a feeling this chapter will toss some more drama in this adolescent stew of chaos. Good luck Mr. DragonShadow
With a glass of wine,
Requiems-Bliss

"Maybe I didn't realize it before..." Sour Sweet wiped her eyes with the back of her hand. "How doomed to being alone I was."

Yeah, I know the feeling, Sour. And what will Vinyl think? Tell her it was to make her friend feel better. For a good cause. That could work, right?

So did they do "it" or just makeout? Sorry not quiet clear on that.

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Well, Sour Sweet got off, at the very least. But then again, sex doesn't *have* to involve orgasm. So from the looks of things, they followed through and did it quite completely.

Hmm.

It seems like you...might have glossed over a significant chunk of the day to get back to the Sour Sweet problem. Which does this story a huge disservice, unless you're planning to recount what the girls did on their first day in flashbacks.

Sugarcoat poured her last glass of wine with a wry smirk on her lips. "Remember. Every sip you drink is a dagger through Twilight Sparkle's heart. So enjoy."

That was a bit...malevolent. :twilightoops:

"Why? Because I scare everybody off? Because nobody wants to risk being close to a fucking psychopath!?" Sour Sweet rose to her feet with her fists clenched. "Because my brain isn't wired right and nobody in their right mind will ever want to get close enough to me to so much as fucking kiss me!? Is that why!? Of course it is! It's always been why! It's why I'll be fucking alone forever!"

Poor Sour. :pinkiesad2:

"Don't give me that look..." Sugarcoat adjusted her glasses. "I was just going to tease her about her freckles..."

:facehoof:

And Lemon gets her first taste of...being unfaithful. Even if the circumstances totally excuse it.

Wow, way to screw up your actual relationship Lemon. That was the wrong way to handle that situation. Hope she likes being single again.

Meanwhile, on the other side of the door...

Indigo: "Did they just... do the thing?"
Sugarcoat: "Indeed."
Twilight: "B-but Lemon just committed infidelity!"
Sunny: "Twilight, dearie, remember what I said about being a mature adult?"

I'd like to say that what happens in Las Pegasus stays in Las Pegasus for Lemon's sake, but life is rarly so kind.

"Children make bad decisions, adults follow the rules." Twilight glared.

Actually, that's pretty much the reverse of things, Twi. When you're a kid, all you get are rules you're told to follow. Don't stay up too late, don't eat dessert before dinner, don't jump on the bed, go to class, brush your teeth, don't burn down the garage...
But when you're an adult, you become the one who makes the rules for yourself. Some rules were there for your own benefit, but being an adult means managing your own risks. It's your life. So long as you don't hurt anybody, it's all up to you as to how to live it.

This is my favorite version of "The Spectacle"
I like to think it was this version they were listening to in the car, Lol

*points out that I *was* going to go to bed a while ago, but I had a hunch this would be coming up soon*.

I'm pleased with this one in its entirety. Bless you, Vinyl and Lemon, and may little musical notes emit from your bedroom together for many years.

When I read your blog post I thought: "Heh, nothing can surprise me.":rainbowdetermined2:
Then came Sugarcoats story:pinkiegasp:
But I like the ending

"You really are a jerk, you know that?" She pulled out of the parking lot, turning to make her way towards the interstate.

"Yes. Yes I am. Yet you all hang out with me anyway." Sugarcoat smirked back.

The best lines of this chapter. This is why I love Sugarcoat.

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may little musical notes emit from your bedroom together for many years.

That is so wrong and yet so right.

Sugarcoat as always was awesome.

I actually want to see if any of the shadowbolts got any replies to their adverts at the love spa. Given that Sugarcoats was basically 'Are you man enough to date me?' she should have hundreds of replies by now, mostly from jerks but you never know, at least it should keep her in free food for a while. Of course as we see here her normal chat up line is basically, 'You, me, sex, now!" so she was being fairly coy on the video.

It's good that Vinyl is so understanding, personally I think she should be at least a little put out by it. The general situation is realistic they are young and caught up in the moment but I think Lemon should have called her either before or just after the original tryst, it's a bit of a passion killer but Vinyl deserved to be asked.

"Uh, Sugarcoat? You can't be nostalgic for a time you weren't alive for." Indigo snickered.

Fight me, Indigo. :rainbowdetermined2:

I can totally see vinyl and lemon making out

"I'm not trying to steal you from your girlfriend. Frankly I'd rather eat the rotten asshole of a road killed skunk and then down it with beer."

Oh, Angry Video Game Nerd, you really have changed the lives of so many people...

Sugarcoat: "I had sex when I was twelve."
Me: Bwuuuuuh?! :pinkiegasp:
*Cue flashback*
Me: ... I should've known, :facehoof:

Based Vinyl Scratch, :moustache:
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Good story and a very nice way to end it. Tho for some reason, I was half expecting a sex scene with Sunny Flare and Twilight Sparkle :twilightblush:

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Two girls (or boys, of course) can be very close without having sex.

All's well that ends well, and Sugarcoat continues to be everyone's favorite troll. This pleases me.

"I've had sexual experiences before without dating and it didn't end badly."

Sugarcoat? Sexual experiences?!
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"You already made that mistake once in Grand Theft Auto."

Relevant.

"I'd rather eat the rotten asshole of a road killed skunk and then down it with beer" --

She's the Angry... Video Game... Neeeeeeeeeerd.....

"What does it make us?" --

Easy -- you're a cheater, and she is a slut.

Oh teens...always think the laws of morality don't apply to them. Until they do...Hey, that gives me an idea -- try writing a story where one of them actually does get pregnant. That would make for a really mature and long story. Or a very short one, depending on the choice.

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I am not going to get into a moral/philosophical debate with you here. Your beliefs are your own and I'm not going to question them. All I ask is that you please refrain from "slut-shaming" in my comments.

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