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DiamondandIce

We don't deserve a bad ending. It's up to us to create our good endings.

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Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #1 · Sep 2nd, 2021 · · · The Traitor of Crystal Prep ·
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I never realized that the one Twilight liked had a harsh life.

Ghost2003
Ghost2003 #2 · Sep 2nd, 2021 · · · The Traitor of Crystal Prep ·
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I can't wait to see what will happen after this story will the girls and their boyfriends all go an epic adventure together to save the world? Just a thought

Harold4
Harold4 #3 · Sep 4th, 2021 · · · The Traitor of Crystal Prep ·
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Twilight's an adorable little nerd! She's so cute!

DiamondandIce
DiamondandIce #4 · Oct 27th, 2021 · · · Dark Fate Part 2 ·
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That will be announced after I finish Twilight's side of the story

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #5 · Oct 27th, 2021 · · · You Don't Need Me Anymore Part 1 ·
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“I’m sorry little fella (big fella).” You said after removing the last screw opening a hole at the back of jvj. Then you reach into your bag again and in your hand is some sort of tracking bug. After pushing a button on it, then you placed it at some area inside jvj that Micro Chips won’t even know. “With this, I will know right away if you did go haywire.” You then place the screws back sealing the opening as you begin to walk out of the room.

Wait, He's the one who caused the robot to go haywire?!!

DiamondandIce
DiamondandIce #6 · Oct 27th, 2021 · · · You Don't Need Me Anymore Part 1 ·
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Keep reading the tracking bug is for him to know, the answer to your question is no.

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #10 · Nov 21st, 2021 · · · Mending the Past Wounds ·
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Wow that was intense. I'm wondering what will come next...

Postwarmonkey50
Postwarmonkey50 #11 · Dec 3rd, 2021 · · · Epilogue ·
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Oh boy
This won't end well.

Pete100
Pete100 #12 · Aug 24th, 2023 · · · The Traitor of Crystal Prep ·
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He then gave you a push but you returned it with three punches to his face as he fell to the ground. While Twilight was looking for her glasses, even though she can’t see she can hear what's going on. The rest of the boys attacked you but you retaliate as you had to throw some of them even kicking one of them in the gut while the other who charged only got clotheslined by you.

This makes me wonder the fighting capabilities of everyone in the group.

Pete100
Pete100 #14 · Aug 24th, 2023 · · · Dark Fate Part 1 ·
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Is it me or do all the guys use their powers for their own benefits. I’m not really complaining about it, because it makes them more human, but I wished it was called out more.

Pete100
Pete100 #15 · Aug 24th, 2023 · · · Dark Fate Part 2 ·
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Whoever this shadow or villain is they seem interesting.

Pete100
Pete100 #16 · Aug 24th, 2023 · · · You Don't Need Me Anymore Part 1 ·
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“You called Rarity a hindrance?” Ardee said as a shroud of mist begins to form around him and his pendant begins to glow. You tried to pull your hammer away but his grip was too strong so suddenly. He then turned his head to face you with his eyes now glowing and was very furious. “HOW DARE YOU!”

Is this some sort of upgrade?

Pete100
Pete100 #17 · Aug 24th, 2023 · · · You Don't Need Me Anymore Part 2 ·
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“I’ve started all of this and falsely accused for something he unintentionally did...and I will be the one to end this. Go on! I‘ll hold it off as long as possible.” Ardee said as Rainbow ran back into the building to get her friends.

At least he’s taking responsibility.

“It took all seven of us with Flash’s help and his band, but Ardee...did this all by himself?” Twilight said as she turned to one side to see your unconscious body. “NIGHT-!” Her sentence was cut as she stepped on something by one of the ice chunks. After moving it, she finds your severed prosthetic arm.

Wait, so he’s stronger than all of them?

Pete100
Pete100 #18 · Aug 24th, 2023 · · · Mending the Past Wounds ·
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“You should know that this will be about what happened after the Friendship Games, the day I plotted to takedown Cinch and the entire Crystal Prep, and when I transferred to Canterlot High.” You closed your eyes for a moment and took a deep breath. “I just want to properly apologize about that. Yes I admit that was all for revenge, but I hope you can understand what me and Twilight have been through. No person deserves to be treated like that. There is this saying ‘No one is born as a bad person, it will depend on the choices they made and the environment they’re in’. Up to this day I still carry this guilt on the grudge I bore to this place and I just want to say I’m sorry and I bear that grudge no more. I’m not asking and forcing you to forgive me, I just want to say this to keep my mind at peace. But I forgave all of you.”

I feel like there are better quotes to use.

Pete100
Pete100 #19 · Aug 24th, 2023 · · · You're Not Alone ·
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I had to do a lot of research to add to this chapter.

That’s good.

Pete100
Pete100 #20 · Aug 24th, 2023 · · · Epilogue ·
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"Oh, her." Both Shadowbolt's pause there for a moment for a student they were referring to. "He and the others will figure it out then. If you are just going to stand there, I will leave you to meet up with our boyfriends."

They have boyfriends, too?

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