Hold Back Tomorrow

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Kerk

Kerk #1 · Aug 5th, 2017 · 1 · 1 ·

Very interesting. I noticed the Bohemian Rhapsody reference.

PiMan

PiMan #2 · Aug 5th, 2017 · 1 · 2 ·

The time skip(?) at the end threw me off; probably even more than intended.
Also, I know this is porn, but there is a possible plothole. Future Twilight is treating everything as a stable time loop but appears to be expecting a divergent loop result. Impregnating Past Twilight should not improve the number of scientists in the future because these events already happened. This would have been avoided if the impossible dick-growing science has been applied to Past Twilight, impregnating Future Twilight instead.

TwinAttorney864

TwinAttorney864 #3 · Jan 17th, 2021 · 1 · 1 ·

This shouldn’t work. Using the Grandfather Paradox, without a reason for Future-Twi to go back in time, she should not be able to go and impregnate Sci-Twi and that creates a loop itself since without impregnating Sci-Twi, Future-Twi has a reason to bo back in time and do so, but if she does, then its impossible to go back in time

GT3RS

GT3RS #4 · Feb 23rd, 2022 · · ·

"I... have to impregnate you."

AYO WHAT

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