• Member Since 29th May, 2016
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MetalJrock


Just a guy writing stories, mainly crossovers.

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Comments ( 19 )

Have you the source of the story pic? Its a good pic :D
edit: forget it, the pic itselfs showes the source :D

Ok I like the story so far, but repeating "the woman" over and over again isn't really the best idea

Twilight awoke, sitting up on her bed, "M-Midnight was right..." she told herself in disbelief, "N-Now I just gotta figure out how to assess this situation. Oh... What have I gotten myself into?"

Hopefully, some kinky fun with your dimensional counterpart.:ajsmug:

Where did you get the cover art?

8052504 Lumineko is one of my fountains of inspirations for covers too

Interesting opening chapter my friend

I'm really enjoying this. Their interactions are a bit clumsy and awkward but that's just what you'd expect from a couple of experimenting virgins. It's so cute, and remarkably sensual. I think it's adorable and sexy and I'm really into this.:twilightsmile:

Why's the color saturation on your cover picture so different from the source version?

8056220 At this point, it's like a to be continued.

8059644 Thanks.

8062084 It does now that I look at the picture again. See, I mainly use my phone to set up a story before writing it. I think I made a habit of using the enhance feature to clear up my pictures saved, and I guess it ended up more saturated as a result. I can fix that up though if you want.

I totally count this as masturbation. I mean Twilight is literally fucking herself. :twilightblush:

Really loved the character of Midnight Sparkle in this story.

8056220
This comment, right here.

Perfect.

Whew lad! This is one sexy bit of writing! I like it! This is a new ship for me, but like other commenters have said, it's sensual, sweet, and just a hair awkward enough to be cute.

This was kinky from beginning to end & I love it!

Wow getting fucked by your inner demon must be something..😏*nosebleed*

This is moving way too fast. There aren't nearly enough Twi2 fics, but this simply isn't believable.

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