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GearMane


Hey everypony! New to the whole 'open' scene of ponies, as I have been lurking since mid season 2.

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Very nice. More pls.

This story hits many of my interests. I'd like to read more.

oh gees when i saw those images i knew this would come about eventually.

I do have one comment. It seems Lilly drops out of the story response-wise two-thirds through the second chapter to only focus on Tinker and Skye's reactions.

Do like KRD's Latex Vault drawings :D

Now, I'm sure this will be an interesting read ^^

> Mentions the Equestrian wastes
> Not Fallout: Equestria related
:rainbowhuh:

Damn it, I don’t want to have to read some fetish clop‐fic just to satisfy my curiosity about whether this story is in a post‐apocalyptic setting (and if so, how it came to be that way) or if “Equestrian wastes” simply refers to the badlands. :duck:

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It means that it does not exist in the realm where FoE takes place, but in similar kind to it. Like sisters of sorts, some similarities and some differences

Love the ending here, everything she was planning. All gone :3

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It's not done yet...

Comment posted by MrZJunior deleted Dec 5th, 2015

Hmmm. A story where the porn might have more purpose than just to be porn and there is some actual effort in crafting characters.
Truly an interesting anomaly.

Am curious about what it is about Lily that has her getting that different treatment, and how it could be used in their escape. Outside of having a vulnerable space open.
So i await the next chapter.

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A guise most clever indeed!

6703807 Am hoping the next chapter is underway. Rather curious about how this all comes out.

Will say one thing though. It is an interesting alternative interpretation of a fallout mixed equestria, but there seems like there is a rather large lack of magic involved.
Still it has my interest.

Yeah, this story, it works and I hope so badly for a good ending for these horses. Poor guys. Please continue this story.
If this was the end, I'd cry. Not a lot, but some nonetheless.
Upon reflection. I have a theme song for this work.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lrfhf1Gv4Tw

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Got 3/4 of a chapter done, need to write a scene for it... Then pass it to the editor

This is a great story. Very sensual. I do have to wonder; if they have the same access as the Zebra, and he was in isolation for quite some time after doing a lot of violent things, doesn't that mean that after such punishment their record is cleared up? Or is it once blocked due to their action, they could never get back again?

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Probably should have wrote it in, but they work on a yearly basis, resetting to 0 after their 365th day there. But any tier they cross, from a normal muzzle, to a muzzle with a gag in it, stays like that. So they'd have a Tier 2 muzzle, but be at 0 strikes

Could have been anyonboby

Um.

Anyway, I am really enjoying this, though I felt this chapter was a bit weak. Lilly goes all the way when it comes to bondage (and apparently she got drugged, because that was one heck of a trip), and seriously considers the situation she's in--so far so good. But then she just snaps back to "I have to get out!" like nothing happened? What's with that?

Edit: Similar question for Skye.

So how soon can we expect another chapter?

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Been working on it the past few days

Yay, new chapter! You did not leave us hanging. :twilightsmile:

Again with the swings in character motivation and action, this time for Ticker. I am disappointed in this chapter, especially since Ticker's "decision" to stay was the biggest thing in it. His sudden anti-Wasteland speech feels contrived, as does the idea that whatever the Ark's been doing (and it doesn't seem to be much; there aren't really any hints that conditioning outside of the narrative has taken place) has actually managed to train them to feel unpleasant to outright physical pain when contemplating a return to the Wasteland (especially in this short a time).

It's not even necessary to use this plot device when the technically-inclined one has to stay behind anyway because of how the escape door works.

Speaking of outright physical pain, where did that go? It's just kind of not mentioned again.


And this chapter doesn't get a pass for 'porn logic' due to containing no porn.

Nuuu i wanted them all to escape happily. Damn you!

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Yeah, kinda there with you. This came out of left field. Not to mention how they're going to get out of those suits, or how Skye's going to explain wandering around the wasteland with a half a pound of metal pierced through herself.

I feel like this was a draft that needed a few more passes before publishing to firm up the transition from Lilly wondering if she should stay to TInker just shrugging and going full on space madness.

Either that of a case of the 'welp, I got off, better wrap this up quick'. :rainbowlaugh:

This chapter took an interesting turn!

This was a great read, I had heard of this idea a few month ago and had scanned all of the newer Fo:E stories in the hopes that someone wrote this sort but for no a veal. I was lucky to finally find this story so like this and I was definitely not disappointed in reading it. one thing that I was wandering about how do the residences of the ARK wash their bodies one in a while? Also, are their any foals that are sometime bone in this ARK or are they all captured?

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I haven't had the muse to work on the next few chapters.... Been trying to build on where I was taking the story but not have an exposition dump

7324002 it's still a great story

7324002 Still, I am curious about basic hygiene and how the Arc perverse it into something kinky.

"Arkitecture" is brilliant name for a company.

I REALLY like the "tolits" so kinky!

any hope on more coming up with this story again soon?

No more hope on an update on this?

I miss this story.

I would also love to see this update!

Эта история была просто бесподобная.
К сожалению, я не смоо более найти похожего шедевра.
Как жаль что автор ее бросил, на такой ноте, и таким образом.

English
This story was simply incomparable.
Unfortunately, I can no longer find a similar masterpiece.
What a pity that the author left it, on such a note, and in this way.

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