• Member Since 20th Jan, 2014
  • offline last seen Mar 1st, 2022

GearMane


Hey everypony! New to the whole 'open' scene of ponies, as I have been lurking since mid season 2.

Comments ( 9 )

The shmexiness has been doubled! XD

Hey! This was made yesterday! The odds I'd read the first one just to find the second one a day after it came out.

And jus read it. Can't wait to see more chapters!

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If I get inspired again, there may be more.

this was ok.

would've been really great if there was mention of a way Dash was being monitored. it seemed like Twi sealed her in and just left her.

feels too much like abuse to me

also, does anypony else know where Dash is or what they're doing? if Twi got killed then how would Dash get free?

So guessing there is no chance of seeing a aftermath, maybe with Twilight enjoying Rainbow's new weekness.

......thats it? oh.... i was hoping to see how this turned out.....

Is this story...end?

Damn no part 3 even after all this time. Though guess that is just how things go.

Would have been really cool to have a chapter 3. Maybe have Twilight bringing Rainbow for a walk teasing her as she tries to stop herself moaning.

Alternatively she could fit Rainbow with special horseshoes that have lots of gadgets and things inside. That can remotely tickle and tease her feet. Maybe even use them to train Rainbow. So with the push of a button Rainbow would practically melt begging Twilight to play with her. Perhaps even lock her in chastity edging and denying her with the only pleasure being from the shoes or Twilight's personal touches.

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