• Member Since 20th Jan, 2014
  • offline last seen Mar 1st, 2022

GearMane


Hey everypony! New to the whole 'open' scene of ponies, as I have been lurking since mid season 2.

Comments ( 11 )

I love it! Nice short story with a dark isolated feel.

I got confused real quick in which I just started skipping and skipping..

That's a horrific thing this go through

I really enjoyed this, and I'm glad you are sharing it instead of leaving it as a image-story blurb for an uploaded image. Strangely, I am curious why that image wasn't used for the cover art though.

This was a very interesting TF story I love the idea that she would have a very hard time adjusting to being mobile again and show how things where for her and how she started from being horrified to gradually accepting it even preferring it over life. Very good work.

You've GOT to be kidding me. 6,000 words for this??

Would someone PLEASE inform me why this story starts with a quotation mark, that doesn't close? Is she talking the entire story? Is she telling it to someone? If that's true, then how come at the end there's no indication that she was telling it to someone?

That alone confused me greatly. Your plot was very unoriginal, as well. It was clear that the main character wanted to become a statue greatly, but that's all you were trying to communicate. You weren't entertaining anyone, you weren't giving a sequence of events, rather it was a bunch of fluff, about how "Did I want to stay silent, stay as a statue or join the world again?" In fact, all you were doing was communicating that a mare likes being a statue, wants to become a statue. I could rewrite your story in one sentence: "There is a mare that exists. She likes being a statue better than being a pony, because it's not as fast-paced."

Find another hobby, writing isn't for you.

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What a dreadful comment.

Definitely an itneresting read. Almost seems like she went so insane that she just became sane later down the road.

Before I read, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

That was an interesting and detailed take on petrification. Well done!

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The story involves a situation that evokes feelings of dread, but has a nice ending that doesn't leave you feeling depressed. It's not a Tragedy, is what I'm getting at.

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