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Ponyess


I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP

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The Sirens ended up at Canterlot High, stirring up trouble and inciting riot as they went. How else could the people react on them?

As they suggested the Battle of the Bands, Celestia and Luna went along. Maybe it could be a good thing? It sure sounded exciting enough at faced value.

Along came the Rainbooms and smashed a dream, cracking up the beautiful gems of their pendants, rendering the Dazlings speechless and distraught.

If it had been the end of things, there had been no story to tell. The friends soon came up with a new plan to move along. Knowing what had made the Sirens so powerful and dangerous.

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6515600 If you would be kind enough to point out the grammar issues that bothered you, and give me a chance to stab them down and fix them? I certainly would be grateful, if you care to elaborate on this.

The one glaring problem with Twilight is that she currently is attending Crystal Prep, which takes her entirely out of the picture at this point in time.


It isn't? It is in reaching out and cheering up, when Pinkie Pie does shine, right? Even if we have seen her as a Disaster on occasion?

As to the Vocabulary, please point out the specifics and point out the issues, so that I cantry to deal with them.

I have it as a Pinkie episode in order to get closer to the characters, and the convenience of an I in the story.

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