Luna knows everything about Twilight Sparkle, From her childhood up to everything she has done in the year since Twilight freed Luna, but why does she know these things?
On the other hand Twilight is going crazy turning against her friends as though something is eating at her and shes powerless to stop it.
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lol, "The worlds first gay pride pony"? nice one
This story looks intresting, I can only guess that the sliver of Nightmare Moon was incredibly weak and was most likely inactive untill recently, ooh this idea of yours puts a bit more fear into Twilight's freakout in Lesson Zero.
I approve of this story so much. Especially 'gay pride pony' lol
Definately looking forward to updates.
Looking forward to future parts, if any.
Oh the second chapter was just sent to my editor thaylien if you should thank anyone it should be him without him this story wouldn't have even been up. as for the soul part i owe a part of the ideas to a friend of my Baron he helped me with the psychological parts without him i'd have been lost...but my part in this story is the plot line and some of the ideas too but those two deserve as much recognition for this story as i do
Also the third chapter should be written either by tomorrow or monday and i should be able to send it off monday night...hopefully i get it back tuesday afternoon...and part two hopefully ill be able to post it monday night
[Rainbow Dash Salute] I'm on it... after some sleep. It's gone 1:30am now, and I'm getting into silly amounts of Skyrim... need to sleep, no more Shouting at dragons tonight...
35781 a thank you to thaylien and Baron then.
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No, there is never enough Skyrim, and never enough shouting at dragons (as long as its not Spike)
Ok slight update chapter 2 might take a bit longer because the writer (me) is a idiot and tends to use Abiword....and my editor (Thay) just informed me that only abiword reads abiword and well...alot of computers dont have abiword....so yes feel free to insult me for my incompetence.
MOAR!!!
Dun Dun Duunnn!
I second that thought, this is getting intresting.
Hmm... I missed a bit... Capital 'S' on Twilight Sparkle in the line 'Twilight Sparkle had Multiple Personality Disorder'. Silly Nick, silly.
That aside, I'm thoroughly pleased with how our author is moving this story now, he's doing better than I'd thought, by a long way
Good background music to listen to while reading this story; Dr. Horrible's sing-along blog.
DAMN WHOEVER CREATED CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!
37639 Lol im glad you like it, although the cliffhangers are fun to put in ill try to stop them
although it probably wont happen....also no damning the cliffhanger guy without him i wouldn't be able to make you all anticipate the third chapter
37639 Lol im glad you like it, although the cliffhangers are fun to put in ill try to stop them
although it probably wont happen....also no damning the cliffhanger guy without him i wouldn't be able to make you all anticipate the third chapter
BUCKING CLIFFHANGER
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Definately left me looking forward to more whenever it goes up
Heh, finally got an account here so I can comment with relative ease. And isn't this just plain fun? The whole set-up to some tasty, angsty shipping with a side order of Nightmare Moon shadowing to rain on their parade!
Now, as we all know, best ship has to be... threesome! Celestia, Luna and Twilight!
(Sorry, it's late and I'm in the mood for a little silliness.)
In any case, I can't wait for the next chapter, I have ideas, but it's all Tom's story, I'm just the editor. Bring on the shipping, brony!
AAAHAHAHAA!
That ending was awesome!
The entire chapter was great, I'm really enjoying this story
This is totally awesome. So, here goes.
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!
Considering the tags are "Romance, Sad and Dark" I started reading expecting something grim and I was not disappointed!
However the occasional Trollestia moments, which to my surprise don't brake the story, really add a spark to the whole thing.
Definitely needs a Comedy tag though.
Love the story and eagerly wait for the next update. :)
why is she calleed lunacy
43782 Some 4-rth wall braking stuff. Basically a reference to a fic called "Lunacy".
Well sort of a reference to lunacy and lunauaghty but also there will be another reason in the story as to why shes called lunacy and expect it to be a bit...well insane....ALSO thay you c&%k YOU PUT MY REAL NAME UP YOU WILL DIE!
Ok so a slight update....chapter 4...where to begin its going to be a little late....maybe alot late....i tend to get easily distracted especially if it has the words elder scroll v iv iii ii i ps3 computer game killing things....anyway because i keep getting distracted its taking time over 4 days ive only wrote 536 words....thats a alltime low record for me i usually have a chapter written within a day sent to thay and i get it maybe a day to 3 days later.....so i might start writing it now which is at 12:46 or i may play skyrim...but do not worry if i dont write it tonight it will be sent to thay by tomorrow evening even if i have to throw skyrim out the window....probably not going to happen but until then adios and keep on reading
47588 rainbowpie why you put so many yes's
It updated! FINALLY. I agree with RainbowPie xD
Wow, that's quite a pickle. Of course they forgot that this soul binding happened during a period of intense magical discharge, and under those circumstance it could be bound to something more disposable, like a...soul gem? that's what there for after all, and then Twilight could make an awesome enchanted bow that shoots rainbooms!
Oh my...this is getting intense...great work on this one, really enjoyed it.
*shakes my head* i dont like chapter 4....it just doesnt feel right so im going to change it around a bit and then re-upload it...
NO NO NO i hate chapter 4 i hate it...its deffinantly going to get rewrote completely...curse my stupidity to think i could a intense chapter in 2 hours....4000 words of utter crap!
I thought it was really well done but alright. good luck on the rewrite ^_^
48405 chapter 4 well done? BAH too many jumps not enough emotion it was more like a collective string of notes rather than a flowing story the rewrite should be finished either sunday or monday though
Ah I understand ^^ tyt -grin- BTW where canI find these Lunacy Lunaaughty stories?
51483 on here of course Lunacy is quite sad...and lunaughty its sorta a clopfic i read and the sequel to princess molestia....but even though there is graphic scenes i like them just for the fact they're full of complete comedy
YAY awesome revision!
I didnt mind the way it was, but the revision IS nice
oooooooooooooooooooooh!!!!!!!!! awesome!!! can't wait for the next chapter!
great story so far I'd give it a 4.5/5
the whole idea of the story is brilliant so 5/5 for that, but the writing I'd give a 4/5
Your going through the story awfully fast, I felt like you could fave written so much more at the parts where twilight was getting mad at her friends, or at least been a bit more descriptive. The dialog between celestia, luna and twi can be a bit awkward at times. The nightmaremoon parts are great so i feel like you should have her in it more. Overall it's a very good story and i can't wait for the next chapter!
54629 I know what ya mean when I first started writing it I was trying to get it out as fast as possible and now I kind of regret it.
I kinda have to agree with Shauno5166. This story has great promise and is keeping me entertained, not to mention laughing, but...it's really one jumbled mess. There's missing periods EVERYWHERE, commas where periods should be, missing italics during some thoughts while it's there for others, run-on sentences everywhere, a severe lack of details in many places, misspelled words here and there, a lot more. Please don't think I'm nagging you or trying to be mean; I'm just telling you what I saw. I copy and pasted all four chapters on Microsoft Word and saved it (since that's what I do with all stories that I find myself liking), but being the grammar Nazi that I am, I constantly have to keep correcting things as I go along. It's not dreadful enough for me to want to stop reading, but it IS distracting.
As for the story itself...it's a pretty good idea, not to mention both funny and freaky at the same time. I love the parts where Luna and Celestia tease, mock and torture one another; those moments are priceless. However...the whole thing could use a lot more details; it seems you're REALLY rushing. I don't like to use that word, since it's overused by commenters, but...it's true. First you'll have Twilight crying...then going to sleep...then waking up...then going to go apologize...then yelling at Nightmare Moon...then more crying...then more sleep. You really need to slow down; this story is great otherwise. I love the idea of Twilight x Luna/Celestia, too; it's adorable. I kinda wish Nightmare Moon wasn't so evil and rotten, though...I wish she'd learn.
Do keep going, though! Good luck to you and the rest of what you do with this.
58268 well honestly that happened for 2 reasons One i tried to take on too much at once trying to get like 4 3000 word chapters out in like 2 days and two is simply i don't really write shipping or romance or psychology i prefer action and horror....so this for me is out of my element...but keep pointing out mistakes and once i get the chance ill correct them as i go along...But once ive finished this you can count on my next story being 100 times better
i dislike you immensely i laughed so hard at the worlds first gay pride pony thing it woke my mum up now i have to do extra jobs tomorrow
63245 XD sorry
"IT'S THE PLOT!"
You sir, win the internet
Good chapter, the beginning was a little confusing, but I understood kinda what happened. Really enjoyed it though, good work man
just me or is it starting to sound like luna was in a prono
you sir are made of epic win i have laughed more then i thought possible only one problem my laughing is waking up my mum!