I don't know what the Slice of Life tag is doing here but that last chapter took the dark tag and ran with it!

Shoulda done a terminator reference....

Otherwise...holy sh** that was dark...but well written.

Although after reading this story I think I kinda want to write a story about a few who don't want to accept it and maybe throw in the other species too...ill look into that.

Its to bad scootaloo is dead i want to see her get eaten by rainbow dash but she got eaten by lightning dust why did you do that

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I don't think Scoots is dead... she never jumped in the vat, and since she ate the colt that she was doing the staring contests with, she's safe from the night crazy

This is overall a good story, and I enjoyed reading it. I literally could not put it down. I read all 16 exisiting chapters in one day, and I'm actually kinda dissapointed I've caught up. It's a very well writen story, a bit dark and graphic at times, sure... but it's not the worst thing I've ever read in that regard. I'll add this to my watch list, and look forward to the next chapter.

And scootaloo is now the rainbow maker.

Ok placing bets on final 5
Fluttershy
Cheeraly
DT
Scootaloo
Trixie (yes I know she not shown yet but it be awesome if out of nowhere she's one of the last ponies standing cause Trixie)
Also please some pony drug and eat blueblood.

Hmm, will this ever be finished? It's possible the show will end first!

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It seems likely at this point!

Basically, it'll get continued if I have ideas for and a desire to write more soft vore. v.v Writing in general has been really slowing down for me though.

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Ah, I know the feeling. I personally haven't yet had it happen that long, but I've got a fic I've been writing for like 5 months now that I haven't even started putting out chapters of.

I must say by the way, this is one of the more out-there vore fics, really willing to explore new territory, and partially inspired my stuff. About the only thing I can criticize is Spitfire not using Zephyr's mouth as a toilet.

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That is a great idea, but I think it would need to be commission story, I just hope that the author continues to write more chapters of this story.

tip the nature of this can be helped by using the fact the whole population is halved each minute until only two remain so using that to conclude the story with the last two ponies deciding who wins and talking about how fast the population vanished could help with the writers block caused by mass characters