6353181 It is directly inspired by it, yes. The author kept protesting that there was no way the idea would work with continuity, so I wanted to see if I could come up with one.
I like this one a lot better since it explains why ponies would want to be eaten when there's no reformation. Please continue this. I'd love to see Fluttershy become Rarity's willing meal.
6355266 Eh, fine, I'll add a note. The site defines plagiarism as copying the words and not the ideas, though, even if the wider definition is wider. It's just sort of like trigger warnings; they clutter up the description, and someone already linked it in the first comment. I guess that could fall off the page.
The other chapters will diverge more since I have other scenes in mind that don't borrow pairings from the other story, since he hasn't written any more of it yet.
(and now he'll happen to pick the same ponies and make me look like a liar. Okay: Dinky x Scootaloo, Silver Spoon x Applejack, Zecora x... well, it was going to be Fluttershy but someone requested her and Rarity, so I don't know.)
so in theory you could assume you had permission and see whether you actually were able to eat them or not, but we encourage everypony to ask first, and be confident in their meal’s answer.
I'm just sitting her giggling to myself as I imagine that situation. Great writing and great story, though I won't be going any further, simply because willing prey has just never made sense to me.
this is very similar to this
6353181 It is directly inspired by it, yes. The author kept protesting that there was no way the idea would work with continuity, so I wanted to see if I could come up with one.
I like this one a lot better since it explains why ponies would want to be eaten when there's no reformation. Please continue this. I'd love to see Fluttershy become Rarity's willing meal.
You really need to give credit to the original, because it's close enough to push it over the plagiarism line if you don't.
6355266 Eh, fine, I'll add a note. The site defines plagiarism as copying the words and not the ideas, though, even if the wider definition is wider. It's just sort of like trigger warnings; they clutter up the description, and someone already linked it in the first comment. I guess that could fall off the page.
The other chapters will diverge more since I have other scenes in mind that don't borrow pairings from the other story, since he hasn't written any more of it yet.
(and now he'll happen to pick the same ponies and make me look like a liar. Okay: Dinky x Scootaloo, Silver Spoon x Applejack, Zecora x... well, it was going to be Fluttershy but someone requested her and Rarity, so I don't know.)
I'm just sitting her giggling to myself as I imagine that situation. Great writing and great story, though I won't be going any further, simply because willing prey has just never made sense to me.
This is really damn bleak
I will root for the ponies all popping out intact again in the new universe. Assuming everyone manages to get eaten in time, which seems unlikely. n_n