I like how Scootaloo got the tail end of things, where Lightning just kept up the inevitability as she tried to stop it. Kinda surprised Dash wasn't more angry.
Why dash you promise to eat scootaloo but you got eating by dust I and go and find scootaloo then eat her and then you can get eaten can you do that in the next chapter please I want that to happen
7029859 7029892 Well I'm complaining. What gives? Would it kill you to let Scoots be happy? Or Apple Bloom, for that matter? To friggin' Silver Spoon of all ponies.. urgh. Whyyyy. Best filly goes to second-worst filly. Seriously, why.
7644266 Kind of uninspired about the next part since the original plan was too violent. Also working on another story for random writings. But I'm hoping to think of something that I want to write for this still.
7029859 You didn't see it coming? Even Scootaloo saw it coming!
There should be a bit more on Scootaloo's reaction later.
I like how Scootaloo got the tail end of things, where Lightning just kept up the inevitability as she tried to stop it. Kinda surprised Dash wasn't more angry.
One guess what that chapter's going to be about.
7142283 Heeheehee
You know, I hope that this ends with Scootaloo facing down Diamond Tiara at the end of the world. That'd be pretty cool.
Why dash you promise to eat scootaloo but you got eating by dust I and go and find scootaloo then eat her and then you can get eaten can you do that in the next chapter please I want that to happen
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Well I'm complaining. What gives? Would it kill you to let Scoots be happy? Or Apple Bloom, for that matter? To friggin' Silver Spoon of all ponies.. urgh. Whyyyy. Best filly goes to second-worst filly. Seriously, why.
I really want to love this story.
7644266 Kind of uninspired about the next part since the original plan was too violent. Also working on another story for random writings. But I'm hoping to think of something that I want to write for this still.