Twilight and the others tries to find Spike.
This story is about Twilight and the others trying to find spike
but will they ever find spike and have a happy ending or will
it have a sad ending?
Please write on the comments about the things wrong on this story (First One.)
Almost 700 WORDS!!!!!!
Anywayz I really really hope you liked this one although I
still think its short I've spent HOURS on this.
Once again I hope you liked it and comment if you please
Lots of grammar issues. Overdone idea for the story. Every pony is out of character.(Zecora doesn't even rhyme)
6321317 Yeah thanks I always knew I'm bad at grammar
A coma?!!!!!?!?!???!!????
They say talking to one who's comatose about memorable moments could lead them back.
6323360 Thnx for the tip I might put that on the next chapter oh and i will edit this a bit.
dun worry guyz I'm gonna make chapter 5 soon, because well I'm going to
visit my mom and dad for 2 days so yeah dont worry -Ella755
This is Chapter 5 I'M RESTING MY HAND NOW
6342918 Good point.
6342918 Okay so I'm working on a new story and I promise you, there will be 1000+ words on every chapter.
Spike is still in that comatose state.
6723914 actually, I thought every people already knows what'll happen, and I got lazy. So yeah I'm a bit busy here you know. And I still need to work on my 2nd story DX But still.... Sometimes, the answer is that I'm lazy (Don't tell that I've been reading stories this whole time instead of working on the chapters.)
6723914 Fine, fine... I'll make an epilogue. 'Kay... wow I already have writer's block. brb
By far this is actualy interesting i will continue reading this good luck on writing future fics
7087651 I'm working on the next chapter.